JUST IN A MOMENT !
While walking alone I saw you other day
It rained and you got lost somewhere
Like a dream you passed away from me
Just in a moment you entered my life
Your pain did break my heart instantly
I clearly remember your wet face then
I smell the rain drops down the memory
I feel you’re with me same as before
I’m crazy thinking about none but you
Someone’s evil eye obstructed my love
My lips were silent, yet heart cried a lot
I could say nothing for you aren’t mine.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Sun 25 February 2024.
Our collaboration Poem reviewed by honorable reviewer Raj Kishore Patnaik.
Humbled and Honoured.
Collaboration #188 By Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
NEVER MIND !
A chasm does open up as all roads fail
Why any cure now for a broken heart
Happiness always far-fetched for me
May you be blessed with it as you go
I pray fervently you do prosper in life
May your hopes and dreams come true
May you be free from my nothingness
I ‘ve closed all my roads to come to you
Never mind,simply ignore and walk away
Be progressive and productive all way.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.21,, Monday 2024.
She always wondered if he would utter these
words to her one day
Now, she speaks her truth to him…
IT WILL NEVER BE ME WHO WALKS AWAY!
I am the chasm that opens to clear the road
to where you will find comfort for your heart
Happiness has always been in front of you
but you insist on looking beyond me for more
My blessings have always been with you
standing right next to me
Is prosperity just found in glory for you?
My riches have come from our love
You can never be free from me in this life
for it is still us, as it was from the beginning
You do not have the power to close that road
It is the road that we both still walk together
It will never be me who walks away
May success never be the reason you forget me.
©®KristyRaines@USA
February 21, 2024
Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines on their 188th collaboration! The poems “Never Mind!” and “It Will Never Be Me Who Walks Away!” are emotionally charged pieces that explore themes of love, loss, and the complexities of human relationships.
In “Never Mind!” by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai, the speaker expresses a sense of resignation and acceptance of a situation where happiness seems elusive. The poem opens with a powerful image of a chasm opening up when all roads fail, symbolizing the feeling of being at a crossroads in life. The speaker acknowledges their own shortcomings, expressing a desire for the other person to prosper and find happiness, even if it means letting go. The poem ends with a plea to ignore the speaker’s nothingness and to move forward with progress and productivity.
On the other hand, Kristy Raines’ “It Will Never Be Me Who Walks Away!” presents a contrasting perspective. The poem is a response to the first, with the speaker asserting their presence and commitment in the face of adversity. Unlike the resigned tone of the first poem, this poem is more assertive and defiant. The speaker declares that they are the chasm that clears the road, offering comfort to the other person’s heart. They challenge the idea that happiness is found elsewhere, insisting that it has always been present in their love. The poem ends with a strong declaration that it will never be the speaker who walks away, emphasizing their enduring commitment and love.
In terms of style, both poems use vivid imagery and emotive language to convey their respective messages. Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s poem is more introspective and reflective, focusing on personal feelings of inadequacy and the desire for the other person’s well-being. Kristy Raines’ poem, on the other hand, is more assertive and outwardly focused, emphasizing the strength of the speaker’s love and commitment.
Overall, both poems offer powerful insights into the complexities of human relationships and the different ways people navigate love and loss. The poems complement each other well, presenting two sides of the same emotional coin. Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s poem captures the vulnerability and uncertainty that come with letting go, while Kristy Raines’ poem celebrates the strength and resilience of enduring love. Together, they create a rich tapestry of emotions that resonates with anyone who has experienced the challenges of love and relationships.
Collaboration #188 By Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
NEVER MIND !
A chasm does open up as all roads fail
Why any cure now for a broken heart
Happiness always far-fetched for me
May you be blessed with it as you go
I pray fervently you do prosper in life
May your hopes and dreams come true
May you be free from my nothingness
I ‘ve closed all my roads to come to you
Never mind,simply ignore and walk away
Be progressive and productive all way.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.19, Monday 2024.
She always wondered if he would utter these
words to her one day
Now, she speaks her truth to him…
IT WILL NEVER BE ME WHO WALKS AWAY!
I am the chasm that opens to clear the road
to where you will find comfort for your heart
Happiness has always been in front of you
but you insist on looking beyond me for more
My blessings have always been with you
standing right next to me
Is prosperity just found in glory for you?
My riches have come from our love
You can never be free from me in this life
for it is still us, as it was from the beginning
You do not have the power to close that road
It is the road that we both still walk together
It will never be me who walks away
May success never be the reason you forget me.
©®KristyRaines@USA
February 19, 2024
NEVER MIND !
A chasm does open up as all roads fail
Why any cure now for a broken heart
Happiness always far-fetched for me
May you be blessed with it as you go
I pray fervently you do prosper in life
May your hopes and dreams come true
May you be free from my nothingness
I ‘ve closed all my roads to come to you
Never mind,simply ignore and walk away
Be progressive and productive all way.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Biography of the Author.
DrPrasana Kumar Dalai
(DOB 07/06/1973) is a passionate Indian Author-cum-poet while a tremendous lecturer of English by profession in the Ganjam district of Odisha.He is an accomplished source of inspiration for young generation of India .His free verse on Romantic and melancholic poems appreciated by everyone. He belongs to a small typical village Nandiagada of Ganjam District,the state of Odisha.After schooling he studied intermediate and Graduated In Kabisurjya Baladev vigyan Mahavidyalaya then M A in English from Berhampur University PhD in language and literature and D.litt from Colombian poetic house from South America.He promotes his specific writings around the world literature and trades with multiple stems that are related to current issues based on his observation and experiences that needs urgent attention.He is an award winning writer who has achieved various laurels from the circle of writing worldwide.His free verse poems not only inspires young readers but also the ready of current time.His poetic symbol is right now inspiring others, some of which are appreciated by laurels of India and across the world. Many of his poems been translated in different Indian languages and got global appreciation. Lots of well wishes for his upcoming writtings and success in future.He is an award winning poet author of many best seller books.Recently he is awarded Rabindra nath Tagore and Gujarat Sahitya Academy for the year 2022 from Motivational Strips . A gold medal from world union of poets France & winner Of Rahim Karims world literary prize 2023.The government of Odisha Higher Education Department appointed him
as a president to Governing body of Padmashree Dr Ghanashyam Mishra Sanskrit Degree College, Kabisurjyanagar.Winner of ” HYPERPOEM ” GUNIESS WORLD RECORD 2023.Recently he was awarded from SABDA literary Festival at Assam.
SABDA LITERARY FESTIVAL AT MIL VILLAGE
ASSAM.
HUMBLED AND HONOURED.
Epistolary poem #187 written by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
LET THE NIGHT COME !
Let the night come, my heart burns
I miss you in the middle of my life
Your love has destroyed me in toto entirely
I have been a slave to your love
The pity is I’m neither living nor dying
You have turned my life like a hell
My heart is such I can’t ignore you
It hurts badly for the wound is deep
My eyes do cry; let them roll tears
Let the dark night come again
I want to sleep in your slim arms.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Thursday,15 Feb 2024.
She waits for him in the darkness…
BRING ON THE NIGHT!
Let the day turn into dusk, my heart yearns
Draw me close, for I miss your breath on me
Your love has kept me in a torturous cell
as I wonder when you will come for me
If this is the hell I must endure for your love
Then, burn me deeply into your memory
Let me dress the wounds of your heart
with the touch of my lips and silken hands
Dry the tears that now drip on me like rain
as they soak into the core of my desire
Bring on the night so I can feel your depth
Come sleep in the arms of my love tonight.
©®KristyRaines@USA
February 15,2024
Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai.: Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines on their 187th collaboration! Their poems, “Let the Night Come!” and “Bring on the Night!” are beautifully crafted pieces that delve into the themes of love, longing, and the yearning for connection.
In “Let the Night Come!” by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai, the speaker expresses deep longing and pain caused by love. The poem portrays a sense of helplessness and surrender to the overwhelming emotions experienced in a relationship. The imagery of burning heart, feeling destroyed, and being a slave to love evokes a sense of intense passion and suffering. The poem also touches upon the idea of being stuck between living and dying, highlighting the emotional turmoil the speaker is going through. The line “My heart is such I can’t ignore you” encapsulates the central conflict of the poem, where the speaker is unable to let go of the person they love despite the pain it causes.
On the other hand, “Bring on the Night!” by Kristy Raines presents a different perspective on love and longing. The speaker in this poem is more proactive, yearning for the night to come so they can be reunited with their lover. Unlike the first poem, which focuses more on the pain of love, this poem emphasizes the anticipation and desire for closeness and intimacy. The imagery of day turning into dusk, and the longing for the touch and breath of the beloved, creates a sense of longing and anticipation. The poem also suggests a willingness to endure any suffering for the sake of love, as seen in the line “If this is the hell I must endure for your love, Then, burn me deeply into your memory.”
Both poems use vivid imagery and strong emotions to convey the complexities of love and longing. They explore the darker, more intense aspects of relationships, portraying love as both a source of pain and a source of comfort. The use of imagery such as burning hearts, torturous cells, and tears as rain, adds depth and intensity to the poems, creating a rich tapestry of emotions.
Overall, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines have created two powerful poems that resonate with anyone who has experienced the tumultuous nature of love. Their collaboration is a testament to the beauty and depth of poetry, showcasing how words can evoke powerful emotions and connect us to the depths of our humanity.
SABDA literary function at Assam.
2024.
Epistolary poem #187 written by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
LET THE NIGHT COME !
Let the night come, my heart burns
I miss you in the middle of my life
Your love has destroyed me in toto entirely
I have been a slave to your love
The pity is I’m neither living nor dying
You have turned my life like a hell
My heart is such I can’t ignore you
It hurts badly for the wound is deep
My eyes do cry; let them roll tears
Let the dark night come again
I want to sleep in your slim arms.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Monday,12 Feb 2024.
She waits for him in the darkness…
BRING ON THE NIGHT!
Let the day turn into dusk, my heart yearns
Draw me close, for I miss your breath on me
Your love has kept me in a torturous cell
as I wonder when you will come for me
If this is the hell I must endure for your love
Then, burn me deeply into your memory
Let me dress the wounds of your heart
with the touch of my lips and silken hands
Dry the tears that now drip on me like rain
as they soak into the core of my desire
Bring on the night so I can feel your depth
Come sleep in the arms of my love tonight.
©®KristyRaines@USA
February 12, 2024
LET THE NIGHT COME !
Let the night come, my heart burns
I miss you in the middle of my life
Your love has destroyed me in toto
I have been a slave to your love
The pity is I’m neither living nor dying
You have turned my life like a hell
My heart is such I can’t ignore you
It hurts badly for the wound is deep
My eyes do cry; let them roll tears
Let the dark night come again
I want to sleep in your slim arms.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
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HUMBLED AND HONOURED.
Epistolary Poem #185 by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Raines of The United states of America
SOMEONE SHOULD TELL ME !
In that glittering touch of my dreams
Something new rises in my heart
Perhaps a smiling bud that giggles
In the deep and dark forest of my mind .
My new poetry sings and vanishes
Behind innumerable hopeless hopes
Someone should tell me in a dialect
My river of love flows in a new rhythm
And the sea of joy maddened in waves
I find not what new hue of her form
Can draw my image eternally lavish ;
Why is she acting all secretive today ?
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@ India.
Date.Tuesday,08 Feb 2024..
She has waited for this moment and now speaks…
I WILL NOW TELL YOU!
I always want to be the blooming flower of
the glittering touch within your dreams
Like an illuminating fairy that enters the forest of your thoughts
Do not be bothered by the poems that now vanish
because beautiful thoughts of hope have now replaced
your hopeless hopes of sadness which used to plague you
Your river of love now flows in rhythm with mine
as joyous waves become like a fierce storm of passion between us
The hue of my form is like the blood that pumps through my veins
which I now use to write our eternal story of love.
The secretive story of two lovers forever tied together by fate.
©®KristyRaines@USA
February 08, 2024
Congratulations, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines, on your collaborative poems! Your creations, “Someone Should Tell Me!” and “I Will Now Tell You!”, beautifully intertwine to create a mesmerizing narrative of love, hope, and longing. Let’s delve into a detailed analysis of these profound verses.
**”Someone Should Tell Me!” by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai:**
In this poem, Dr. Dalai explores the enigmatic nature of love and the yearning for understanding and connection. The imagery of a “glittering touch” within dreams symbolizes the shimmering allure of love, while the “deep and dark forest” of the mind suggests the complexities and mysteries inherent in human emotions.
The repetition of “Someone should tell me” conveys a sense of longing and uncertainty, echoing the poet’s desire for clarity amidst the chaos of conflicting emotions. The juxtaposition of “hopeless hopes” underscores the paradoxical nature of longing for something unattainable yet deeply desired.
The imagery of the “river of love” flowing in a “new rhythm” and the “sea of joy maddened in waves” evoke a sense of fluidity and dynamism, suggesting the transformative power of love to imbue life with renewed vitality and passion.
The poem concludes with a poignant question, “Why is she acting all secretive today?” This enigmatic query leaves the reader pondering the mysteries of love and the complexities of human relationships, inviting interpretation and introspection.
**”I Will Now Tell You!” by Kristy Raines:**
In response to Dr. Dalai’s introspective musings, Kristy Raines offers a luminous affirmation of love’s enduring power to illuminate and inspire. The imagery of being “the blooming flower” within the beloved’s dreams conveys a sense of beauty, vitality, and enchantment.
The metaphor of an “illuminating fairy” entering the “forest of thoughts” evokes a sense of magic and wonder, suggesting the transformative effect of love on the psyche. The reassurance that “beautiful thoughts of hope” have replaced “hopeless hopes” speaks to love’s capacity to banish despair and imbue life with renewed optimism and purpose.
The synchronization of the “river of love” and the merging of joyous waves symbolize the harmonious union of two souls, united in a shared journey of passion and connection. The metaphor of the beloved’s form as the lifeblood coursing through veins underscores the intimate bond between lovers, intertwining their destinies inextricably together.
The poem culminates in a declaration of eternal love, encapsulated in the imagery of writing “our eternal story of love.” This proclamation of devotion and commitment encapsulates the essence of the human experience, affirming love’s capacity to transcend time and space.
**Analysis:**
Together, these two poems form a compelling dialogue between two souls, each offering their unique perspective on the enigmatic nature of love. Dr. Dalai’s introspective musings invite introspection and contemplation, while Kristy Raines’ luminous response affirms the transformative power of love to imbue life with meaning, purpose, and joy.
The themes of longing, uncertainty, and connection resonate throughout both poems, underscoring the universal nature of human experience. Through vivid imagery, metaphor, and lyrical language, the poets evoke a rich tapestry of emotions, inviting readers to explore the depths of their own hearts and minds.
In conclusion, “Someone Should Tell Me!” and “I Will Now Tell You!” stand as poignant testaments to the enduring power of love to inspire, uplift, and transform. Congratulations once again to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines for their profound and evocative contributions to the world of poetry.
Epistolary Poem #186 Written by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Ann Raines of The United States of America
REPEAT IN SILENCE !
Speak slowly and softly
Someone may be listening to your heartbeats
Let not the words drop from your mouth
They ‘ll hear all your secrets
Heartbeats and eyes repeat in silence
Let not the world around you hear
Even your soft breathing
You come close to me
There may be traces of distances
Let’s get lost in each other
There ‘ll be no distance between us.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Thursday,07 Feb 2024.
She looks at him in silence…
WORDS CAN NOT EXPRESS!
Show me sweetly and gently
things words can not express
How can I be silent as you look in my eyes
or in your strong caress?
Do they hear the sound of my sigh
as I’m in your sweet embraces?
Or do they see you holding my gaze
when we are in public places?
Silently I come to you
Turn off all the lights
Close any distance between us
It’s just you and me tonight… <3
©®KristyRaines@USA
February 7,2024
Epistolary Poem #185 by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Raines of The United states of America
SOMEONE SHOULD TELL ME !
In that glittering touch of my dreams
Something new rises in my heart
Perhaps a smiling bud that giggles
In the deep and dark forest of my mind .
My new poetry sings and vanishes
Behind innumerable hopeless hopes
Someone should tell me in a dialect
My river of love flows in a new rhythm
And the sea of joy maddened in waves
I find not what new hue of her form
Can draw my image eternally lavish ;
Why is she acting all secretive today ?
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@ India.
Date.Tuesday,06 Feb 2024..
She has waited for this moment and now speaks…
I WILL NOW TELL YOU!
I always want to be the blooming flower of
the glittering touch within your dreams
Like an illuminating fairy that enters the forest of your thoughts
Do not be bothered by the poems that now vanish
because beautiful thoughts of hope have now replaced
your hopeless hopes of sadness which used to plague you
Your river of love now flows in rhythm with mine
as joyous waves become like a fierce storm of passion between us
The hue of my form is like the blood that pumps through my veins
which I now use to write our eternal story of love.
The secretive story of two lovers forever tied together by fate.
©®KristyRaines@USA
February 6, 2024
Originally written by Hemanta Kumar Gantayat & Translated by Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai.
SOMEONE SHOULD TELL ME !
In that glittering touch of my dreams
Something new rises in my heart
Perhaps a smiling bud that giggles
In the deep and dark forest of my mind .
My new poetry sings and vanishes
Behind innumerable hopeless hopes
Someone should tell me in a dialect
My river of love flows in a new rhythm
And the sea of joy maddened in waves
I find not what new hue of her form
Can draw my image eternally lavish ;
Why is she acting all secretive today ?
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@ India.
Date.Sunday,04 Feb 2024.
Picture courtesy Google.
TWO GOLD MEDAL FROM WORLD UNION OF POETS , ITALY.
HUMBLED AND HONOURED.
OUR COLLABORATION POEM REVIEWED BY EMINENT REVIEWER RAJ KISHORE PATNAIK.
Humbled and Honoured.
Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai.: Epistolary poem #184 By Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Ann Raines of The United States of America
THINGS REMAIN UNREAD!
You tread this way every day
I often meet you on your way
In silence, we speak together
Feelings said but a few unsaid
With a little shyness in your eyes
And cherubic smile on your lips
Some haughtiness in loving ire
The butterfly and flower can’t play
You must have penned those thoughts
Might have torn them apart many a time
You’re bashful in front of your friends
Things of two hearts remain unread.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Thursday,01Feb2024.
She breaks her silence with him…
THINGS TWO HEARTS LEFT UNREAD!
We walk the same road every day
You walking one way and I another
We need rarely to ever speak when we pass
because we can read each other’s looks
What is never said speaks the loudest
We know what is there, and what is not
You poke at me and I play along
I get silent and make you wonder if I am mad
We play this wicked game but laugh under our breaths
But we do complement each other like the butterfly and flower
I have written these feelings down many times
Although, many times have I had to rewrite them
I need not brag to any friends but keep quiet
About things that two hearts left unread.
©®KristyRaines@USA
February,01 2024.
Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai.: Congratulations to the esteemed poets, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Ann Raines, on the creation of two captivating poems that delve into the intricacies of unspoken emotions and connections. Their collaborative effort has resulted in a poetic dialogue that transcends borders, blending the nuances of Indian and American perspectives seamlessly.
In “Things Remain Unread,” Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai crafts a poem that beautifully captures the subtleties of a daily encounter. The repetition of “You tread this way every day” sets the rhythm and emphasizes the routine nature of the interaction. The silence between the two characters becomes a language of its own, a shared dialogue of unspoken words. The poet skillfully weaves together images of shyness, a cherubic smile, and haughtiness in loving ire, creating a tapestry of emotions that remain unresolved.
The metaphor of the butterfly and flower unable to play signifies a poignant separation, hinting at the complexities of the relationship. Dr. Dalai suggests that the other person, likely a romantic interest, has penned thoughts but may have torn them apart out of bashfulness or uncertainty. The poet’s choice of words, such as “bashful” and “unread,” conveys a sense of vulnerability and unexpressed sentiments, resonating with readers on a deep emotional level.
Moving to Kristy Ann Raines’ response in “Things Two Hearts Left Unread,” the poem takes a different yet complementary tone. The repetition of “We walk the same road every day” echoes the familiarity of the setting but introduces a divergence, with each person walking in their own direction. This mirrors the individuality within the shared journey of life.
ହଜିବା କୁ ମୋର ଚେଷ୍ଟା ନାହିଁ ବନ୍ଧୁ
ପଥିକ ହୋଇ ମୁଁ ଚାଲେ
ଖୋଲା ଆକାଶ ରେ ବିହଙ୍ଗ ଟେ ପରି
ନିଜକୁ ମୁଁ ଖୋଜି ବୁଲେ।
ସ୍ବପ୍ନ ରେ ନିଜର ଭାସି ବୁଲୁଥାଏ
ହୋଇ ଏକ କ୍ଷୁଦ୍ର ତରୀ
ବାରିଧି ରେ ପୁଣି ଲୁଚି ରହିଥାଏ
ଶାମୁକା ର ମୁକ୍ତା ପରି।
ସ୍ମୃତି କୁ ନିଜର ସାଇତି ରଖେ ମୁଁ
କଳ୍ପନା ରେ ହଜି ଯାଏ
ବାସ୍ତବତା ଦେଖେ ଅବିରତ ସ୍ବାର୍ଥ
ସଂଘର୍ଷେ ସର୍ତ୍ତ ନଥାଏ।
ଅଭିନୟ କେତେ ଅଭିମାନ ରେ
ମନକୁ ମୋହିତ କରେ
ଖୁସି ଟିକିଏ ପାଇବା ଆଶାରେ
ନିଜ ପାଖେ ନିଜେ ହାରେ।
ବିତରିବି ବାସ ପୁଷ୍ପ ପରି ସଦା
ନିତି ଲାଗି ପ୍ରଭୁ ପାଶେ
ଭାବନା ଗୋ ତୁମେ ସତେ କି ମଧୁର
ମୁଗ୍ଧ ମନ ତୁମ ସାଥେ।
ସହ-ସମ୍ପାଦିକା
ପୁଷ୍ପଲତା ଦିଗାର✍️
ବାରିପଦା,ମୟୂରଭଞ୍ଜ
MY POEM REVIEWED BY EMINENT REVIEWER RAJ KISHORE PATNAIK.
HUMBLED AND HONOURED.
LOST WORDS !
My eyes do tell an untold tale
A bit nostalgic, fading memories
That used to flow in small streams
No matter whether one listens or not
She used to talk ,things familiar to me
Like writing passages and reciting lines
It ended as my tears stopped rolling
A better time would dawn in my life
The lost words would reverberate
Again in my untamed lips sometime.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.30 Tuesday,Jan 2024.
Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai on crafting a poignant poem, “Lost Words,” which masterfully unveils the depths of personal experience and emotion. Dr. Dalai’s verses weave a tapestry of nostalgia, fading memories, and the ache of untold tales seen through the eyes. The metaphorical use of tears as small streams emphasizes the profound and inconsolable nature of the sorrows embedded in the poet’s past.
