My reviewed poem “LOST IN A DREAM” analysed by eminent reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.
Humbled & Honoured.
With sprinkling droplets of nectar
The king of seasons has arrived
Love and madness in your blue eyes
Something in the core of my heart
Burns in an unknown fire in this rain
Looking for you I’m lost in a dream
As the dark dusky clouds wander Through out the untamed sky of time
The night passes slowly in my eyes
And despite attempts I can’t sleep.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@ India.
Date. Mon, 16 Sept 2024.
REVIEW.
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The poem “Lost in Dreams” connotes aspirations, hopes, fear ,and angst in regard to the fulfillment of love. The poem begins with the emotion of optimism and hope for love ,symbolised by “king of seasons”The lover notices love and yearning in the eyes of the naive and innocent sweetheart.The desire in him to get her burns unrevealed in his heart.
Dark clouds floating in the sky foreshadow something foreboding , causing immense angst. As all mortals are,he is bound to grow old with time. His youthfulness– the king of seasons in poet’s language — will not last long.This angst, which is universal,make him restive, leading to sleepless nights.The poem conveys the feelings and emotions of the poet in particular and all lovers in general.Very attractive poem Dr Prasanna Sir.Congratulations and respects.
ANALYSIS.
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Heartfelt congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai for crafting yet another profound and evocative poem, “Lost in a Dream,” and to Dr. Nirakara Das for his insightful review. Dr. Dalai’s poetic brilliance, combined with Dr. Das’s keen literary insight, has created a perfect harmony of art and analysis. It’s a true celebration of love, dreams, and the passage of time. Both the poem and the review reflect an intellectual and emotional depth that is deeply inspiring. Wishing both of you continued success and recognition in the literary world.
**Analysis of the Poem and Review:**
Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s poem, “Lost in a Dream,” delves into the human experience of love, longing, and the passage of time. The imagery of “sprinkling droplets of nectar” and the arrival of the “king of seasons” symbolizes the freshness and intensity of youthful love. The poet speaks of love as something that burns deeply in the heart, evoking a sense of both passion and restlessness. The phrase “lost in a dream” suggests that the speaker is caught between reality and an idealized vision of love. This dream-like state is further intensified by the “dark dusky clouds” and sleepless nights, indicating an emotional turmoil as the speaker grapples with the transient nature of time and the inevitability of change.
Dr. Nirakara Das, in his review, beautifully captures the essence of the poem, identifying the central themes of hope, yearning, and existential angst. His interpretation of the “king of seasons” as a metaphor for youth and fleeting time adds a layer of universality to the poem, suggesting that the speaker’s personal longing resonates with the broader human condition. Dr. Das’s observation about the poet’s sleeplessness speaks to the inner conflict that many lovers experience—the desire for something unattainable. His review not only appreciates the technical and emotional depth of the poem but also places it in a broader context, making it relatable to all.
Together, Dr. Dalai’s poetic vision and Dr. Das’s thoughtful analysis create a powerful dialogue between the text and its interpretation, enriching the reader’s experience. NAMASKAR
