Our reviewed poem “MY SOULMATE ” analysed by honorable reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.
Humbled & Honoured.
MY SOULMATE !
Without you this life ‘ll be in utter despair
We ‘ll meet each other no matter what
Like waves breaking together not to part
Your tinkling anklets my music of heart
You’re my soulmate , so unique in world
Let nothing obstructs our path forever
May we always be found hand in hand
From this cunning world I ‘ll steal you
I ‘ll hide you in the corner of my heart
In trouble I ‘ll take care of you for sure.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date. Tue, 10 Sept 2024.
REVIEW
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Nirakar Sir C: The beloved being far away,of course for a short time, the poet is downbeat thinking that his life will go in vain in the event of her not returning.The trepidation marked in the first line of the poem is rid by a firm determination of the lover to unite with her at any cost.This temporary departure can not bring an end to their bonding.Assuming life to be the sea,they,as waves in it,are inseparable.From the philosophical musings of the first four line, the poem takes a sensuous turn when the lover is reminded of her “twinkling anklets” . This world being devious and cunning, he feels his love unsafe here.His heart,big and expensive enough and a world in itself, can hide her there in order to safeguard from all troubles.The line,”Let nothing obstruct our path for ever” indicates that this temporary separation is unbearable and harrowing for him.Unique poem having personal, universal and spiritual appeal.Congratulations and regards,Dr Prasanna Sir.
ANALYSIS.
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**Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Prof. Dr. Nirakar Dash!**
Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s poem *“MY SOULMATE!”* radiates deep emotion and connection, capturing the eternal bond between two souls destined to remain united. The poet’s profound feelings emerge from the opening lines, where he expresses a sense of despair at the thought of separation. However, this despair is quickly overshadowed by the resolve to reunite, symbolized through the metaphor of waves that break together, yet are inseparable. The idea of life as a vast sea, where the lovers are like waves, is both philosophical and poetic, touching on the universal theme of enduring love.
The transition from the emotional to the sensory is beautifully illustrated by the mention of the beloved’s “tinkling anklets,” which signifies how even small reminders of her presence evoke powerful feelings in the poet. The shift in tone reflects how the lover not only treasures his partner spiritually but also in everyday, tangible moments. The line “Let nothing obstruct our path forever” adds an earnest plea, revealing the poet’s deep anxiety about the separation, yet also his unwavering hope that nothing will come between them.
In his review, Prof. Dr. Nirakar Dash offers a thoughtful analysis that enhances our understanding of the poem. He highlights how the initial trepidation in the poet’s heart gives way to determination, showing the depth of commitment in the relationship. Dr. Dash skillfully observes the philosophical, sensuous, and emotional layers within the poem, and his conclusion emphasizes its unique personal, universal, and spiritual appeal.
Both Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Prof. Dr. Nirakar Dash have created an enriching literary experience through the poem and its review. Congratulations once again on this beautiful poetic achievement!
