Our epistolary collaboration poem #221 reviewed & analysis by honourable reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.we both remain grateful to his effort let’s enjoy reading his review & analysis
Humbled & Honoured.
Epistolary Poem #221 Written by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Raines of The United States of America
UPSET WITH ME !
Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me
Your being upset with me rather troubles
Why so stubborn and arrogant you are
I have the companionship only with you
It’s well tested & proven thousand times
Can sacrifice life & break relationships
Have been waiting for your sweet smile
Can stand anything but your indifference
I know not if I am worthy of your love
But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not .
©️®️DrPrasana Kumar Dalai@India
She giggles for a moment before she responds…
THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!
You often sigh at my craziness and airiness
For my enthusiasm exasperates you to no end
But never be troubled when I am upset with you
Yes, I am stubborn, and possessive with you as well
But can you blame me for being the way I am?
When another smiles at you so sweetly
I sometimes wonder if one day you’ll smile back
especially after so many years of us being together
So forgive me for the times I have lost my smile
There is no one more worthy of my love than you.
Let me just say this, as I put my arms around you…
“You are stuck with me, and I can’t do without you either”. ❤
©️®️KristyRaines@USA
REVIEW & ANALYSIS
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Heartiest congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines on the completion of their 221st collaborative poem episode! Your continued partnership in the realm of poetry is a true testament to the magic that happens when two brilliant minds unite. Each poem you create resonates deeply, reflecting a harmonious balance of emotion, thought, and literary finesse. This latest set of poems, “UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!”, is a perfect representation of how love, despite its occasional turbulence, remains a powerful force that bonds two souls together. Wishing you both endless inspiration as you continue to enrich the world of literature with your captivating expressions. NAMASKAR
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Analysis of the Poems
In their latest collaborative episode, “UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!”, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines once again bring their unique perspectives on love and relationships to life. These poems, while distinct in voice, carry complementary emotions and themes, creating a dialogue that encapsulates the complex dynamics of a deep romantic connection. The poems explore love’s trials and the undeniable bond between two people who have stood the test of time.
1. Exploring Emotional Vulnerability and Strength
Dr. Dalai’s “UPSET WITH ME!” is a poignant expression of vulnerability, encapsulating the speaker’s emotional turmoil when faced with the partner’s discontent. The poem begins with a bold declaration, “Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me,” immediately setting the tone of resilience. Despite the partner’s unpredictable emotions, the speaker reveals that it’s not the eccentric behavior that troubles them, but rather the partner’s indifference, captured in the line, “Your being upset with me rather troubles.”
There is a clear yearning for connection throughout Dr. Dalai’s poem. The speaker admits to a sense of dependency on their partner’s companionship, stating, “I have the companionship only with you.” This line suggests that the bond they share is unique and irreplaceable, tested and proven over time. The speaker expresses an unwavering commitment, even to the point of sacrifice: “Can sacrifice life & break relationships.” Here, the poet reveals the depths of the speaker’s devotion, indicating that they are willing to forsake everything for the partner’s affection.
A sense of insecurity is woven into the speaker’s confession, “I know not if I am worthy of your love,” indicating that despite the speaker’s devotion, there is a lingering doubt about their place in the partner’s heart. This insecurity is balanced with a plea for trust, “But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not.” The speaker is desperate for emotional reconciliation, yearning for the partner’s acknowledgment and acceptance.
In contrast, Mrs. Kristy Raines’ “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!” provides the partner’s response, delivering an equally heartfelt but nuanced perspective. While Dr. Dalai’s poem reflects the speaker’s vulnerability, Mrs. Raines’ poem embodies the partner’s defensiveness yet deep-rooted affection. The poem opens with a gentle rebuke: “You often sigh at my craziness and airiness,” immediately addressing the frustrations mentioned in “UPSET WITH ME!”
Mrs. Raines’ speaker acknowledges their stubbornness and possessiveness, stating, “Yes, I am stubborn, and possessive with you as well.” Rather than shy away from these traits, the speaker justifies them, questioning, “But can you blame me for being the way I am?” This rhetorical question brings to light the insecurities the partner feels when confronted with the idea of losing their loved one. The lines “When another smiles at you so sweetly / I sometimes wonder if one day you’ll smile back” reveal the underlying fear of betrayal or emotional distance.
Where Dr. Dalai’s speaker questions their worthiness of love, Mrs. Raines’ speaker reassures them of their value: “There is no one more worthy of my love than you.” This statement is not only a declaration of love but also a balm to the wounds of insecurity expressed in “UPSET WITH ME!” The poem ends with a tender moment of reconciliation, as the speaker physically and emotionally embraces their partner, “Let me just say this, as I put my arms around you…” The final line, “You are stuck with me, and I can’t do without you either,” mirrors the sentiment of Dr. Dalai’s poem, reaffirming that despite the ups and downs, their bond is unbreakable.
2. The Interplay of Themes: Love, Insecurity, and Commitment
Both poems highlight common themes of love, insecurity, and commitment, though from different angles. Dr. Dalai’s poem delves into the anguish of feeling unworthy of love, emphasizing the emotional weight of indifference in a relationship. The speaker’s fear is not just the partner’s anger but their emotional withdrawal, which represents a greater threat to the relationship.
Mrs. Raines, on the other hand, focuses on the partner’s perspective, shedding light on their possessiveness and insecurities. While they recognize their own stubbornness, the speaker’s jealousy is a reflection of their deep love and fear of losing their partner. Both poems, however, culminate in a reaffirmation of love and commitment, proving that despite misunderstandings, the bond between the two individuals remains strong.
3. Dialogue Between the Poets
What makes this collaboration truly exceptional is the way the two poets create a dialogue through their respective pieces. Dr. Dalai’s poem serves as a plea for understanding and reassurance, while Mrs. Raines’ poem responds with empathy and a promise of lasting love. This back-and-forth mirrors real-life conversations between partners, where one person expresses their fears and insecurities, and the other offers comfort and validation.
The dialogue between the poems also highlights the differences in how each partner processes emotions. Dr. Dalai’s speaker internalizes their fears, feeling unworthy and seeking reassurance. Mrs. Raines’ speaker, on the other hand, externalizes their emotions, revealing their possessiveness and fear of losing their partner. Together, the poems offer a full picture of the emotional landscape of a relationship, capturing both the internal and external struggles that come with love.
4. Tone and Style
The tone of Dr. Dalai’s poem is introspective and somewhat melancholic, as the speaker reflects on their emotional pain and vulnerability. The short, direct lines emphasize the rawness of the speaker’s feelings, making their plea for reconciliation all the more poignant. The use of phrases like “Can sacrifice life” and “I can’t do sans you” underscores the depth of the speaker’s emotional dependence.
In contrast, Mrs. Raines’ poem adopts a more conversational tone, with longer, flowing lines that reflect the speaker’s thought process. The repetition of the word “stubborn” and the rhetorical questions create a sense of reflection, as the speaker justifies their feelings while also seeking to reassure their partner. The poem concludes on a hopeful note, with the physical act of embracing symbolizing emotional healing.
Conclusion
“UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!” are powerful explorations of love’s complexities, offering a nuanced portrayal of emotional vulnerability, fear, and reassurance. Through their collaborative effort, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines have once again proven their ability to craft poetry that speaks to the heart. Their 221st collaboration is not only a celebration of their literary partnership but also a testament to the enduring power of love, even in the face of emotional turbulence. These poems remind readers that love, at its core, is about understanding, patience, and unwavering commitment.
