My free verse reviewed by Eminent Romanian English Poetess Corina Junghiatu.
Humbled & Grateful.
FREE VERSE!
It is said you’re made for someone
Meeting you is a sign of pure love
Perhaps it’s love between you and me
This is the reason for life and death
Wondering kindness is obliged to me.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Thursday 2January 2025.
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Review
Title: FREE VERSE
Poet: Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai
Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s FREE VERSE is a masterful and deeply moving exploration of love’s profound and mysterious connection to the essence of life itself. The poet’s ability to capture the ineffable with such clarity and simplicity is a testament to his extraordinary talent and sensitivity as a wordsmith.
The opening lines, “It is said you’re made for someone / Meeting you is a sign of pure love,” immediately immerse the reader in the timeless and universal belief in destiny and soul connections. These words, though simple, resonate with a profound emotional depth, evoking a shared sense of belonging and purpose that transcends individual experience.
The line, “Perhaps it’s love between you and me,” is a masterstroke of intimacy and vulnerability. By introducing an element of uncertainty through the word “perhaps,” the poet invites readers to delve into the complexities and subtleties of human relationships. This nuanced expression of love enriches the poem, making it both personal and universal.
The declaration, “This is the reason for life and death,” elevates the poem to a metaphysical plane. It boldly asserts love as the ultimate force that shapes existence, imbuing life with meaning and connecting it seamlessly to the mystery of death. This philosophical insight is both humbling and awe-inspiring, reflecting the poet’s visionary spirit.
The concluding line, “Wondering kindness is obliged to me,” is profoundly thought-provoking. Here, Dr. Dalai beautifully underscores the reciprocal nature of love and kindness, suggesting that these virtues are not merely gifts but cosmic obligations that sustain the balance of life. This subtle yet powerful sentiment leaves an indelible impression on the reader’s heart and mind.
Dr. Dalai’s use of free verse is impeccably suited to the poem’s contemplative tone. The unrestrained flow of thoughts and emotions mirrors the boundlessness of love itself, while the deliberate choice of simple, evocative language ensures accessibility without compromising depth.
In FREE VERSE, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai achieves a rare poetic alchemy merging simplicity with profundity, intimacy with universality, and emotion with philosophy. It is a luminous testament to the power of love, life, and kindness, leaving readers not only inspired but also profoundly transformed. This is a poetic gem that deserves to be cherished and celebrated.
Reviewer
Corina Junghiatu
