My poem LiNE OF MY HEART reviewed by eminent reviewer retired Prof Dr Nirakar Dash Department of English classroom room Assam Government.
Humbled & Grateful.
THE LINE OF HEART !
When I open the window of my mind
By crossing the perimeter line of heart
Only your face is visible ; do trust me
Love knows how to give but not to take
Understand you’re my unconditional love
When you feel shy just looking at me
The moon hides itself behind the clouds
I may say the untold things in my heart
They come back from the door of lips
When you look at me and throw a smile
The magnet of my heart pulls it to me
This is affection which you can’t grasp.
©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date.20 Friday December 2024.
REVIEW!
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The poem, “Line Of The Hearts” by Dr Prasanna Kumar Dalai,whose niche interest is love poems, speaks of a love of a high degree.The first two lines speaks of a love that is unbounded.Every moment he sees the beloved ‘s face in his mind’s eye.Love, not a commercial affairs,here stands on no condition at all. It is a selfless offering of the ego, taking it to a spiritual level.It “alters not when alteration finds”.Likenig the lover’s face to a moon resonates with Robert Burns famous line,”My love is a red red rose” The poet feels powerless enough to give out all the upsurge of emotions in his heart.His love for her is beyond her touchstone.Exllently written Dr Prasanna Sir.Regards and grateful!!