MY POEM REVIEWED BY EMINENT REVIEWER RAJ KISHORE PATNAIK
HUMBLED AND HONOURED.
METAPHOR OF LIFE!
The different job you complain about
The dream of someone unemployed
The mischievous child that test your patience is the dream of the childless
The small house you think is too cramped
Is the dream of someone homeless
The modest savings you worry over
Is the dream of those drowning in debt
The health issue you consider burdensome are the dream of someone fighting a terminal illness
The fact that your mistake are not display the world to see is the dream of those haunted by their past
The peace of mind you have
The restful sleep you enjoy
The meal you easily access
These are dream for those living in war torn regions
We must cherish everything we have
Afterall nobody knows
What tomorrow might bring.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Wed,06 Mar 2024.
Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai on his insightful poem “METAPHOR OF LIFE!” His work delves deep into the intricacies of human experience, using vivid metaphors to illuminate the profound truths of life. In this poem, Dr. Dalai explores the theme of perspective, urging readers to appreciate the blessings they have and to empathize with others who may be less fortunate.
The poem begins by juxtaposing common complaints and grievances with the dreams of those who are less fortunate. For instance, the dissatisfaction with a job is contrasted with the dream of someone who is unemployed, highlighting the importance of gratitude and perspective. This sets the tone for the rest of the poem, which continues to draw parallels between everyday struggles and the dreams of others.
One of the most striking aspects of the poem is its use of contrast to highlight the disparity between perception and reality. The speaker challenges the reader to reconsider their perspective on life’s challenges, suggesting that what may seem burdensome to one person could be a dream come true for another. This message is particularly poignant in today’s world, where it is easy to take our blessings for granted and to lose sight of the struggles of others.
The poem also conveys a sense of empathy and compassion for those who are less fortunate. By highlighting the dreams of the homeless, the childless, and the terminally ill, the speaker encourages readers to see the world through the eyes of others and to appreciate the blessings they have been given. This message is a powerful reminder of the importance of empathy and understanding in a world that is often marked by division and conflict.
Overall, “METAPHOR OF LIFE!” is a thought-provoking and deeply moving poem that challenges readers to reconsider their perspective on life’s challenges and to appreciate the blessings they have been given. Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s use of vivid imagery and evocative language makes this poem a compelling read, and his message of empathy and gratitude is one that resonates deeply with readers of all ages.
