MY POEM REVIEWED BY PROF Dr Nirakar Das.

ALL I HAVE TO TELL

My heart has gone crazy too
No longer can listen any consolation
Heart doesn’t hold back even if I ask
You’re in my breaths and emotions
Everyone but you has felt my pulse
Those expressions I spoke of you
Can’t show how my heart throbs
Visible to everyone though you can’t
This is all I have to tell you today
Wrapped in ,I ‘ll touch you and pass
Stop me and I ‘ll stay at your feet.

©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Friday ,17 Nov 2023.

MY POEM REVIEWED BY PROF Dr Nirakar Das
Sir, Department of English Asam University.
Humbled and Honoured.

Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai.: The poem “ALL I HAVE TO TELL” by Dr Prasanna Kumar Dalai,a poet of eminence, pours out the intense feelings of the poet for his lady -love.The first line of the poem, ” My heart has grown crazy too” presupposes his mind having been upset owing to the nonchalant attitude of the sweetheart.Such a state of mind has hit hard the central part of his being.Impervious to any sort of consolation, the lover can’t hold back his unruly tears .His voice is that of a disgruntled person when he says that everybody excepting her realises his feelings and emotions.”You are in my breaths and emotions” attest the feeling that he can’t stand separation from her.All words possible on his part fall short to express his mind.Although everybody can visualise the lover’s madness , the sweetheart can’t.The concluding two lines:”Wrapped in, I will touch you and pass/Stop me and I will stop at your feet” boil down to a little ego and inhibition evinced by the love expecting the sweetheart to bend a bit. A molecule of hints from her side will definitely make him genuflect.Congratulations deare Sir for composing such a nice poem.Due respects.

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