My poem SLIGHT IMPRESSION reviewed by honourable Retired Prof Dr Nirakar Dash of Assam government and analysed by honourable analyst Raj Kishor Pattnaik.
Humbled & Honoured.
SLIGHT IMPRESSION !
You came to my world and disappeared Next moment ; I thought several times
That first look with a slight impression
Why does it make my heart so restless
Your smiling back with sweet glances
I don’t know what you are waiting for
Am I the one whom you trust so much
Why I have this feeling time and again
The buds of rosy lips have blossomed
Is it due to the passion of your heart ?
©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India
Date.Wednesday 23 October 2024.
REVIEW
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The speaker’s sudden encounter with a girl who made a hasty disappearance without a lingering conversation has etched a great impression on his mind.The impression is not “slight” as mentioned in the poem,for a negligible emoton can not give rise to a poem of this kind which is universally applicable.As the first impression lasts long, the speaker is too powerless to delete it.He says:”I thought several times that first look with a slight impression”Her sweet glances make him restless in anticipation of a psychological immediacy.This restlessness is reiterated in the line:”I don’t know what you are waiting for”.His inability to read her mind, which he tries to do,is clearly pronounced when he asks:”Am I the one who you trust so much”. Moreover,this also reveals the feeling of inadequacy that troubles him.The last two lines are riveting in asmuch as they show desires and conflicts in the mental landscape.Very smashing poem,Dr Prasanna Sir. Congratulations and regards.
ANALYSIS
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Nirakar Dash Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai for crafting yet another beautiful and thought-provoking poem, “Slight Impression!” It is a testament to your incredible ability to capture delicate emotions and fleeting moments in such a way that they resonate deeply with readers. Equally, congratulations to Prof. Nirakara Dash for providing a rich, insightful review that sheds light on the subtle nuances of the poem. Your review truly complements the work and allows readers to gain a deeper understanding of its emotional depth.
Analysis of the Poem
Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s “Slight Impression!” is a poem that encapsulates the complex emotions triggered by a brief yet impactful encounter. The speaker in the poem experiences an unexpected and fleeting moment with someone whose presence leaves a lasting impression. This impression, although described as “slight,” is paradoxically so profound that it compels the speaker to repeatedly reflect on it, making the emotional weight of the experience anything but light.
The poem begins with the speaker acknowledging the fleeting nature of the encounter: “You came to my world and disappeared / Next moment.” This sets the tone for the rest of the poem, where the speaker is left grappling with the emotional aftermath of a brief but deeply stirring interaction. The phrase “I thought several times / That first look with a slight impression” reveals the speaker’s attempt to rationalize or understand why this particular moment has left such a significant mark. Despite describing the impression as “slight,” the speaker’s inability to let go of the memory implies that the impact is, in fact, far more profound than they are willing to admit.
The recurring restlessness that the speaker feels is captured in the lines: “Why does it make my heart so restless / Your smiling back with sweet glances.” Here, the speaker is both puzzled and captivated by the subtle cues—the smiles and glances—that suggest a deeper connection or unspoken communication. The tension between what is felt and what is understood is palpable, as the speaker oscillates between uncertainty and longing.
The poem further delves into the speaker’s internal conflict with the lines: “Am I the one whom you trust so much / Why I have this feeling time and again.” These questions highlight the speaker’s vulnerability and insecurity, as they are unsure of their place in the other person’s thoughts or emotions. The speaker’s repeated questioning suggests an inner turmoil, as they struggle to decipher the meaning behind the encounter.
In the final lines, the poem introduces a sense of blossoming desire: “The buds of rosy lips have blossomed / Is it due to the passion of your heart?” These lines suggest that the encounter has awakened feelings of passion and desire, both in the speaker and, perhaps, in the other person. The imagery of blossoming lips evokes the idea of emotional and physical awakening, hinting at the possibility of unspoken attraction or love. The poem, thus, ends on a note of unresolved tension, leaving the reader to ponder the future of this fleeting yet powerful connection.
Analysis of the Review by Prof. Nirakara Dash
Prof. Nirakara Dash’s review provides a thoughtful and nuanced interpretation of Dr. Dalai’s poem. The reviewer begins by noting that the impression left on the speaker is not truly “slight,” despite the poem’s title and initial framing. As Prof. Dash astutely observes, a “negligible emotion” could not possibly give rise to a poem of such intensity and universal applicability. This observation sets the tone for the rest of the review, as the professor unpacks the deeper emotional undercurrents that run through the poem.
One of the key insights in Prof. Dash’s review is the speaker’s “powerlessness” in deleting the memory of the encounter. This inability to move on from the experience, despite its brevity, reflects the profound psychological impact that first impressions can have on an individual. As Prof. Dash points out, the restlessness experienced by the speaker is a manifestation of their anticipation and desire for emotional immediacy.
Prof. Dash also highlights the speaker’s struggle to read the other person’s mind, which is evident in the line: “Am I the one whom you trust so much.” This question, according to the review, reveals the speaker’s feelings of inadequacy and self-doubt, as they are unsure of their role in the other person’s thoughts or emotions. The review effectively captures the emotional complexity of this moment, underscoring the speaker’s internal conflict and vulnerability.
Finally, Prof. Dash draws attention to the final two lines of the poem, noting that they are “riveting” in their portrayal of desires and conflicts. The review concludes by praising the poem as a “smashing” work, a testament to Dr. Dalai’s skill as a poet.
Conclusion
In summary, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s “Slight Impression!” is a beautifully crafted poem that explores the emotional aftermath of a fleeting encounter. Through subtle imagery and probing questions, the poem captures the speaker’s inner turmoil and longing for connection. Prof. Nirakara Dash’s review enhances the reader’s understanding of the poem, offering keen insights into the speaker’s emotional landscape. Together, the poem and review form a compelling narrative about the power of first impressions and the complexities of human desire. Congratulations once again to both Dr. Dalai and Prof. Dash for their exceptional work!
