My reviewed poem SADDENS IN THE DARKNESS analysed by eminent reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.
Humbled and grateful.
My poem SADDENS IN THE DARKNESS reviewed reviewed by eminent reviewer retired Professor Dr Nirakar Dash Department of English Assam Government.
Humbled & Grateful.
SADNESS IN THE DARKNESS !
Memories flood back as I think of her
My life filled with sadness in darkness
We lighted the divine lamp of pure love
Heard footsteps coming but far away
I stood alone, restless with excitement
And with the anticipation of her coming
Many a time I have been betrayed
As she approaches with lowered glance
My heart starts burning with rolling tears
In spite of this a smile comes forcefully
When she comes to smile in my dreams
With her separation I have lost my life
The flame burning but the light is lost
I do console my heart in the love poems
I write to express myself in darkness .
©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India.
Date.25 Saturday December 2025.
REVIEW.
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The poet Dr Prasanna Kumar Dalai laments the loss of purity of love in his poem “Sadness in Darkness”. The assumed physical and mental defilement of the beloved fills the poet with sadness.The word “darkness “as opposed to light , suggests that the love once thought to be divine,has come to a base level that can be ascribed to the moral insincerity of the beloved.The platonic idea of love,in contrast to present day aberrations, has been thrown into the wind. The lover is not able to keep pace with the modern sensibilities of the beloved, who seems to pooh-pooh the poet ‘s metaphysical ideas of clinging to one person only as the soul mate. Her physical disappearance from the scene makes the poet at times excited with anticipation of her coming back and the resultant sense of betrayal.The very appearance of her in dream makes the lover cry in desperation.Now she being a dream for him,she is quite out of his reach.But still the poet lover hopes against hope with a sense of forgiving acceptance.He says:”The flame burning but the light is lost”The last two lines emphasises that the poet has lost all his humour and his poems are only lamentations.Very nicely written Dr Prasanna Sir! My sincere gratitude and regards!! 🙏🙏
ANALYSIS
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Heartfelt Congratulations!
On behalf of myself, a humble teacher by profession and an ardent lover of poetry from India, I extend my deepest admiration and congratulations to the distinguished poet, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai, Sir and the esteemed reviewer, Retired Professor Dr. Nirakar Dash, Sir for this wonderful literary endeavor.
Dr. Dalai, your poem “Sadness in the Darkness” is a heartfelt expression of love, loss, and longing, wrapped in the beauty of poetic imagery and deep emotional resonance. It speaks of the pain of separation, the struggle of unfulfilled desires, and the undying hope that love brings—even in its absence. Your ability to pour such raw emotions into words is a testament to your literary genius.
Dr. Dash, your insightful review not only highlights the nuances of the poem but also adds a profound depth to its interpretation. Your analysis beautifully unravels the themes of purity, metaphysical love, and the poet’s inner turmoil, allowing readers to appreciate the layers of meaning hidden within the verses. Your words are a guiding light for poetry enthusiasts like me, offering a deeper understanding of the art form.
Together, your creative and critical talents have created a moment of poetic brilliance that is truly inspiring. May this collaboration of poetry and critique continue to illuminate the world of literature.
With utmost respect and warm regards,
NAMASKAR
