Our epistolary collaboration Poem #235
Reviewed and analysed by honarable reviewer
Raj Kishor Pattnaik .
Humbled & Grateful.
THE SOUL OF MY LIFE!
Your soul forces me to keep on walking
In my dejected and gloomy world
Even the seas are thirsty and famished
The nectar is in the beauty of your eyes
Can I paint your image or write a poem
An amalgamation of hues and rhythms
You’re the beat of my innocent heart
And the very soul of my mortal life
Your breath is as fragrant as blooms
Your arms have the softness of lotus
The brightness of sunray is in the face
A deer I do find in your gracefulness
Your love can stich up my torn heart.
©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date.02 Sunday February 2025.
She writes him with great determination…
THE HEALER OF OUR SOULS!
In a world where nothing makes sense anymore;
Where the clouds no longer rain, and oceans thirst
I refuse to let the perils of giving up, win
I am not a woman who quits, and we need nothing
but the nectar of hope that fills my tearful eyes
Paint a portrait of my soul with the colors of red
and write me a poem filled with sound of the wind
My heart beats with the blood of a warrior
Though soft and gentle on the surface of my being
I can withstand the beating from the world around us
and I will stitch the wounds around your heart
with strands of resilience that will keep you alive.
And in the end, it will be love that heals both of our souls.
©️®️Kristy Raines@USA
REVIEW
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Dear Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai Sir and Kristy Raines, Madam NAMASKAR
Heartfelt congratulations on creating your beautiful epistolary poems, The Soul of My Life and The Healer of Our Souls. These poems are not just simple writings; they are meaningful conversations filled with emotions. Your collaboration shows how poetry can connect hearts across different countries and cultures.
Both poems are unique and complement each other wonderfully. I am pleased to share my thoughts on your amazing works and celebrate your talent.
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Themes of Love and Strength
Both poems talk about love, hope, and strength but in different ways. Dr. Dalai’s The Soul of My Life is a gentle and loving poem that praises the beloved as a source of peace and happiness. The beloved is described as a guiding light who heals and inspires the speaker.
Kristy Raines’ The Healer of Our Souls focuses on strength and determination. The speaker stands strong despite difficulties, promising to heal wounds and protect love. This poem highlights love as a force that helps overcome challenges and brings healing.
Together, the poems beautifully show how love can be both comforting and powerful.
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Imagery and Symbols
Both poems use strong images to express feelings.
Dr. Dalai uses gentle nature imagery. He compares the beloved’s eyes to sweet nectar and their face to the brightness of the sun. These images create a picture of beauty, peace, and grace.
Kristy Raines uses powerful images to describe struggle and hope. She talks about a dry world where “clouds no longer rain,” but she promises to “stitch wounds” with resilience. This shows strength and renewal.
While Dr. Dalai’s images are calm and soothing, Kristy Raines’ images are bold and filled with energy.
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Tone and Voice
Dr. Dalai’s poem has a soft and loving tone. The speaker admires the beloved and expresses deep gratitude. The words flow smoothly, creating a peaceful mood.
Kristy Raines’ poem has a strong and determined tone. The speaker is confident and firm, ready to face any difficulty for love. Her lines are filled with strength and resolve.
These two different tones balance each other, showing love as both gentle and fierce.
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Structure and Rhythm
Both poems are written in free verse, giving the poets freedom to express their thoughts naturally.
Dr. Dalai’s poem flows gently, with thoughts moving smoothly from one to the next.
Kristy Raines’ poem has shorter, sharper lines. The rhythm matches the strong and determined theme of the poem.
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Emotional Impact
The poems touch the heart in different ways.
The Soul of My Life brings peace and happiness. The loving words create a sense of calm and devotion.
The Healer of Our Souls inspires strength and courage. It motivates readers to stay strong and never give up.
Together, these poems create a meaningful journey of emotions, showing love as a source of comfort and strength.
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Final Thoughts
Dear Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai Sir and Kristy Raines, Madam your collaboration is truly inspiring. These poems show how two different voices can come together to create something beautiful and meaningful.
Your words remind readers that love is a powerful force that heals, strengthens, and connects us all.
Congratulations once again on this wonderful achievement. May your poetic journey continue to bring joy and inspiration to readers everywhere.
Warm regards,
