Epistolary poem #175 Presented and written by
Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and Kristy Raines of
The United States of America
THE TRUE REPLICA OF MY HEART !
No desire is left there in my world
Your unwanted complains taunt me
Age has passed but staying awake
Walked paths though feet seem still
Life remains but breath has paused
Valiant time has shown its spectrum
I ‘ve pain and agony caused by you
Every breath of mine is in your name
Still why should I be upset with you
You’re the true replica of my heart
From whom should I keep distance
Volumes eyes speak & I’m not there .
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Satuarday,02 Dec 2023.
She prays and makes a decision…
HERE I STAND WAITING!
I knock at the door of the home we once shared,
remembering the last words spoken to each other
Time passed and nothing changed from day to day
We walked the same path, yet we got nowhere
Alive but not living became our life together
Little did you know that I felt the same
I started walking my own path without you
for the sake of finding happiness again
and hoping that you would find your smile
That never happened because you were my joy
and I hear that you are now missing me too
How could we be happy without each other?
The true replica of my heart…
So, here I stand at the door of our home, anticipating.
The question is, “Will you smile when you open it”?
©®KristyRaines@USA
MY POEM REVIEWED BY EMINENT REVIEWER OF ODISHA.
THANK YOU DEAR RAJ KISHORE PATNAIK.
HUMBLED AND HONOURED.
THE TRUE REPLICA OF MY HEART !
No desire is left there in my world
Your unwanted complains taunt me
Age has passed but staying awake
Walked paths though feet seem still
Life remains but breath has paused
Valiant time has shown its spectrum
I ‘ve pain and agony caused by you
Every breath of mine is in your name
Still why should I be upset with you
You’re the true replica of my heart
From whom should I keep distance
Volumes eyes speak & I’m not there .
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Friday,01 Dec 2023
Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai.: Dear Dr. Prasana Kumar and Professor Nirakara Dash,
Congratulations on the remarkable achievement of Dr. Kumar’s latest poem and Professor Dash’s insightful review. Dr. Kumar, your poetic prowess continues to captivate and enrich the realm of English literature. Your ability to weave words into evocative tapestries is truly commendable.
Professor Dash, your discerning review adds a profound layer of understanding to Dr. Kumar’s work. Your analysis delves deep into the nuances of the poem, unraveling its layers of meaning and artistic brilliance. Your expertise in English literature shines through, offering readers a profound perspective that enhances their appreciation of the poetic craft.
In his latest poem, Dr. Kumar exhibits a masterful command of language, employing vivid imagery and metaphors that transport readers to realms of introspection. The poem’s thematic richness is evident, and Dr. Kumar’s exploration of universal human experiences resonates deeply.
Professor Dash’s review reflects a keen understanding of the poem’s structural elements, stylistic choices, and thematic intricacies. His astute observations on the use of symbolism, metaphorical devices, and the overall poetic landscape provide readers with valuable insights into the creative choices made by Dr. Kumar.
The poem’s title serves as a gateway to its essence, inviting readers to contemplate the intersection of form and formlessness. Dr. Kumar skillfully navigates this philosophical terrain, crafting verses that oscillate between the tangible and the intangible. The interplay of words mirrors the delicate dance between the concrete and the abstract, leaving readers with a sense of sublime contemplation.
Professor Dash adeptly recognizes the poem’s adherence to traditional poetic forms while pushing the boundaries of contemporary expression. His analysis highlights the seamless fusion of classic and modern elements, showcasing Dr. Kumar’s ability to transcend temporal constraints.
The thematic undercurrents explored by Dr. Kumar invite reflection on the human condition, drawing from a wellspring of emotions that resonate universally. Professor Dash’s review skillfully dissects these themes, offering readers a roadmap to navigate the emotional terrain embedded in the verses.
Dr. Kumar’s use of symbolism is a literary tour de force, and Professor Dash perceptively unpacks the layers of meaning within each metaphor. The symbiotic relationship between the poet and the reviewer is evident, as Dr. Kumar’s words find resonance in Professor Dash’s thoughtful analysis.
The rhythmic cadence of Dr. Kumar’s verses, as noted by Professor Dash, serves as a melodic backdrop to the poem’s thematic exploration. The interplay of sound and sense is a testament to Dr. Kumar’s meticulous craftsmanship, and Professor Dash’s recognition of this adds depth to the review.
In conclusion, Dr. Prasana Kumar’s latest poem, artfully reviewed by Professor Nirakara Dash, stands as a testament to the enduring power of poetry in English literature. Dr. Kumar’s poetic journey continues to inspire, while Professor Dash’s insightful analysis elevates the reader’s engagement with the written word. Congratulations to both on this collaborative triumph that enriches the tapestry of literary expression.
Warm regards,
RAJ KISHOR PATTNAIK
An Epistolary Collaboration #174:
Presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
FEELING ALONE !
With moments passing quickly
My pains will be buried in the grave
Certain things will remain unspoken
With a plethora of pains,feeling alone
How can I trust you again
You ‘ve broken my heart into pieces
You’re no longer with me
That was my yesterday’s dream
I stop breathing as I think about you
Know not what I ‘ve got
Distance is like a curse to me.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Thursday,30 Nov 2023.
She thought of him today and cried…
FEELING REGRET !
As the years flash before my eyes
many things come to mind
Like laughter and kisses on a sunny day
and watching the stars on a warm night
We had time to say so many things
but in silence they will remain
Some things were left unspoken between us;
better heard, while looking in each others eyes
No hearts were supposed to get broken
But in life nothing was ever guaranteed
Today’s memories of two young lovers
were at one time tomorrow’s dreams
Now we both spend lonely years apart
like a never ending curse of despair
Thoughts of you are followed by sighs of passion
and nostalgia fills my longing heart
where used to live laughter and a life planned together.
I wonder if you still think fondly of me?… <3
©®KristyRaines@USA
November 30, 2023.
THE TRUE REPLICA OF MY HEART !
No desire is left there in my world
Your unwanted complains taunt me
Age has passed but staying awake
Walked paths though feet seem still
Life remains but breath has paused
Valiant time has shown its spectrum
I ‘ve pain and agony caused by you
Every breath of mine is in your name
Still why should I be upset with you
You’re the true replica of my heart
From whom should I keep distance
Volumes eyes speak & I’m not there .
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Wednesday,29 Nov 2023.
MY POEM IS REVIEWED BY EMINENT PROFESSOR OF ENGLISH, ASAM UNIVERSITY.
Dr Nirakar Dash . HUMBLED AND HONOURED
Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai.: In this material world where people have multiple desires, the poet says,”No desire left in my world” which mean he has fulfilled all his desires to the extent of desirelessness.Being a love poem, perhaps the poet here speaks of his expansive and sublime love which deem all the desires of this limitative world to be secondary.So he being spiritually situated with no desire left, the desires of the desire-bound beloved taunts him.But what and who can taunt a desireless person! The very word “taunt”in the second line refute the statement of the first line, meaning that, the poet has still some desire lurking in his mind.The third line, strengthening the aforesaid premise,speaks in clear terms,”Age has passed but staying awake”It means the longing is still there.Despite shocks and shakes along the way,he pursues either the ideal or the physical fullfillment, through intermittent spell of weakness (feet seem still) A valiant lover in colourfull youth,he has taken all inflictions by the beloved in his strides.The fifth line, “Life remains but breath has paused” is a clear indication that life is impossible with her removal from the scene.Without her,he is a fish out of water.So the dire desire for her reveal the irony of the first line.The statement,”Every breath of mine is in your breath”hammers on their inseparability that rule out any sort of angst.The title of the poem bears the stamp of an all weather intimacy.The closing line, like the first one, is another ironic gimmick stating, “Eyes speak volumes I am not there” Very nice and witty poem Sir.Congratulations and regards.
AWARDED BY MOTIVATIONAL STRIPS AND GUJARAT SAHITYA ACADEMY ON THE EVE OF 75 TH INDIAN INDEPENDENCE 2022.
MY POEM REVIEWED BY EMINENT REVIEWER RAJ KISHORE PATNAIK.
THE TRUE REPLICA OF MY HEART !
No desire is left there in my world
Your unwanted complains taunt me
Age has passed but staying awake
Walked paths though feet seem still
Life remains but breath has paused
Valiant time has shown its spectrum
I ‘ve pain and agony caused by you
Every breath of mine is in your name
Still why should I be upset with you
You’re the true replica of my heart
From whom should I keep distance
Volumes eyes speak & I’m not there .
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Sunday,26 Nov 2023?
Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai.: Congratulations, Dr. Prasana Kumar, on crafting such a poignant and evocative poem, “THE TRUE REPLICA OF MY HEART!” Your mastery of language and emotion shines through each line, creating a vivid tapestry of introspection and vulnerability.
In the opening stanza, “No desire is left there in my world,” you set a tone of emptiness, suggesting a profound sense of loss or unfulfillment. This absence of desire becomes more palpable as the poem unfolds, revealing the impact of interpersonal struggles.
The line “Your unwanted complains taunt me” introduces a conflict, indicating the presence of unresolved issues and the weight of unaddressed grievances. The use of “unwanted complains” adds a layer of complexity, suggesting a strain in the relationship and the burden of unspoken words.
“Age has passed but staying awake” conveys a sense of enduring wakefulness, possibly signifying the persistent impact of the unresolved issues despite the passage of time. This line hints at the lasting imprint of emotional turmoil, defying the natural progression of age.
“Walked paths though feet seem still” introduces a poignant metaphor, highlighting the paradox of movement and stagnation. The contradiction between walking paths and still feet reflects the internal conflict, where outward actions may not align with the inner emotional state.
“Life remains but breath has paused” captures a profound sense of suspended animation, suggesting that while life continues externally, the essence of living is momentarily halted. This line amplifies the emotional intensity and conveys a deep sense of inner turmoil.
“Valiant time has shown its spectrum” introduces the theme of time as a powerful force, capable of revealing a spectrum of experiences. The use of “valiant” adds a nuanced touch, implying that time is not just a passive observer but an active participant in shaping and unveiling life’s complexities.
“I ‘ve pain and agony caused by you” lays bare the emotional wounds inflicted by the other person. The direct acknowledgment of pain and agony adds a raw authenticity to the poem, as it confronts the source of suffering head-on.
“Every breath of mine is in your name” presents a powerful declaration of entwined existence, where the persona breathes with a constant invocation of the other person. This line reinforces the inextricable connection between the speaker’s breath and the presence of the beloved.
“Still why should I be upset with you” introduces a moment of reflection and self-awareness. Despite the acknowledged pain, there’s a contemplative tone, inviting readers to question the rationale behind holding onto resentment or upset feelings.
“You’re the true replica of my heart” unveils a profound revelation, identifying the person as the embodiment of the speaker’s heart. This metaphorical connection adds depth to the poem, suggesting a unity that transcends the conflicts and challenges presented earlier.
“From whom should I keep distance” encapsulates the dilemma of distance and closeness, questioning the need for separation when the person is acknowledged as the true replica of the heart. This line invites readers to ponder the complexities of relationships and the difficulty of creating emotional boundaries.
“Volumes eyes speak & I’m not there” concludes the poem with a poignant image of unspoken words communicated through expressive eyes. The use of “volumes” emphasizes the depth of unspoken emotions, and the poignant realization of absence adds a bittersweet note to the finale.
In conclusion, Dr. Prasana Kumar, your poem masterfully navigates the terrain of human emotions, offering readers a profound exploration of love, pain, and self-discovery. The careful choice of words, vivid imagery, and emotional resonance make “THE TRUE REPLICA OF MY HEART!” a remarkable contribution to English literature. Congratulations on this exquisite piece of art that captures the intricacies of the human heart with grace and depth.
Raj Kishor Pattnaik
THE TRUE REPLICA OF MY HEART !
No desire is left there in my world
Your unwanted complains taunt me
Age has passed but staying awake
Walked paths though feet seem still
Life remains but breath has paused
Valiant time has shown its spectrum
I ‘ve pain and agony caused by you
Every breath of mine is in your name
Still why should I be upset with you
You’re the true replica of my heart
From whom should I keep distance
Volumes eyes speak & I’m not there .
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Sunday,26 Nov 2023.
MY POEM REVIEWED BY RAJ KISHORE PATNAIK., HONOURABLE REVIEWER OF ODISHA.
HUMBLED AND HONOURED.
ON ITS WAY!
Looking at the world through your eyes
Everything looks pretty
Everything that passed seems to close to you
Like the pictures of yours stick to my heart
Like moon clings to the stars
Or ,you will never get rid of me
Me and my shadow
We are closer than hearts that stick in a soul
When your dreams fall apart
When each passing day
And life gets more exciting
And love is either in your heart
Or in its way.
Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Friday,24 Nov 2023.
Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai,
Congratulations on your recent poem, “On Its Way!” Your verses weave a tapestry of emotions, painting a vivid picture of the world through the lens of love and introspection. In this expansive poem, you invite readers to see the beauty in the ordinary, to perceive the world as a place of enchantment when viewed through the eyes of someone deeply cherished.
Your opening lines, “Looking at the world through your eyes, Everything looks pretty,” immediately draw readers into a realm where perception is colored by the magic of connection. The choice of “pretty” is simple yet profound, suggesting a transformative power in love, capable of turning the mundane into something extraordinary.
The imagery of memories clinging like pictures to the heart is both tender and poignant. It resonates with the universal experience of cherishing moments and holding onto them as if they were captured in a photograph. The comparison of this attachment to the moon clinging to the stars adds a celestial dimension, elevating the theme of love to something timeless and cosmic.
The line “Or, you will never get rid of me, Me and my shadow” introduces an intriguing duality. It speaks to the inseparability of two individuals, emphasizing a connection that transcends physical presence. The metaphor of the shadow, a constant companion, suggests a bond that withstands the test of time and challenges, a relationship that lingers even in the absence of direct light.
The phrase “closer than hearts that stick in a soul” is a poetic marvel. It encapsulates the profound intimacy between two souls, suggesting a connection that goes beyond mere proximity. The choice of words is exquisite, evoking a sense of unity that surpasses the physical and dives deep into the metaphysical.
As the poem progresses, you skillfully navigate through the complexities of life. The lines “When your dreams fall apart, When each passing day, And life gets more exciting” capture the ebb and flow of human experience. The acknowledgment of dreams unraveling adds a touch of realism, a recognition that life is not always a smooth journey. Yet, amidst the challenges, you introduce the idea that life becomes more exciting, hinting at the resilience of the human spirit and the potential for growth in adversity.
The culmination of the poem with the lines “And love is either in your heart, Or in its way” is a masterstroke. It encapsulates the essence of the entire piece, emphasizing the inevitability and power of love. The dual nature of love, as something already present in the heart or as an entity on its way, speaks to the continuous journey of discovery and rediscovery in relationships. It leaves the reader with a sense of anticipation, echoing the sentiment that love is a force constantly shaping and reshaping our lives.
In terms of style, your use of metaphors and similes adds a layer of richness to the poem. The comparisons to the moon, stars, and shadow create a sensory experience for the reader, allowing them to feel the emotions conveyed in the verses. The flow of the poem is seamless, with each stanza building upon the emotions of the previous one, creating a harmonious progression.
The poem’s universal themes of love, connection, and the evolving nature of relationships make it relatable to a wide audience. Your ability to capture the complexities of human emotions in a lyrical and accessible manner is commendable.
In conclusion, “On Its Way!” is a captivating exploration of love and life, showcasing your prowess as a poet. The depth of emotion, coupled with the elegant use of language and imagery, makes this poem a standout piece in the realm of English literature. Congratulations on creating a work that not only resonates with the heart but also lingers in the mind, inviting readers to reflect on the profound beauty found in the journey of love.
Warm regards,
RAJ KISHOR PATTNAIK
Felicitated by Honorable minister of information and Broadcasting,Sri Pritiranjan Ghadai, Honourable MLA of Kabisurjya Smt Latika Pradhan, Honourable MLA of Bershmpur Sri Bikram Panda above all Honourable M P Smt Pramila Bishoyee.
HUMBLED AND HONOURED.
REASON OF TEARS !
You are losing your trust on me
But you can never forget me
I don’t know why I’m certain
You won’t be able to mar my life
Whenever you turn the pages
Everything ‘ll remind you of me
In both pain and pleasure
You ‘ll find me pining for you
Wherever you go , a new spark awaits
Even if you try to extinguish it
You can’t find the reason of your tears.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
