SLIGHT IMPRESSION !

You came to my world and disappeared Next moment ; I thought several times
That first look with a slight impression
Why does it make my heart so restless
Your smiling back with sweet glances
I don’t know what you are waiting for
Am I the one whom you trust so much
Why I have this feeling time and again
The buds of rosy lips have blossomed
Is it due to the passion of your heart ?

©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India
Date Sunday 20 October 2024

Epistolary Poem #222 Written and Presented by DrPrasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Raines of The United States of America

WITHOUT ANY REASON !

In search of faithfulness in this world
I got to know I was in wrong address
And my life hasn’t become complete
My shortcomings were ignored though
I was punished without any reason
If I live on I feel like torturing myself
And I go out fetching God in her heart
The person this heart sincerely seeks
There is always a mystery in the air
My days & nights are upset without you.

©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date.Saturday 19 October 2024.

She hopes one day her dream will come true…

THAT MISSING PIECE!

In search of love in this big world
I never could find my missing piece
The part that brought true happiness
But then came a day that I stopped looking
never thinking that I deserved it
I prayed everyday for that missing piece
that would finally complete this empty heart
I can see you in my dreams when I sleep
I can even feel you touch my cheek
But, when I wake, you disappear once again
Perhaps one day you will find me instead
so I won’t have to wait each night just to meet you.

©️®️KristyRaines@USA

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Our epistolary collaboration poem #221 reviewed & analysis by honourable reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.we both remain grateful to his effort let’s enjoy reading his review & analysis
Humbled & Honoured.

Epistolary Poem #221 Written by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Raines of The United States of America

UPSET WITH ME !

Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me
Your being upset with me rather troubles
Why so stubborn and arrogant you are
I have the companionship only with you
It’s well tested & proven thousand times
Can sacrifice life & break relationships
Have been waiting for your sweet smile
Can stand anything but your indifference
I know not if I am worthy of your love
But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not .

©️®️DrPrasana Kumar Dalai@India

She giggles for a moment before she responds…

THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!

You often sigh at my craziness and airiness
For my enthusiasm exasperates you to no end
But never be troubled when I am upset with you
Yes, I am stubborn, and possessive with you as well
But can you blame me for being the way I am?
When another smiles at you so sweetly
I sometimes wonder if one day you’ll smile back
especially after so many years of us being together
So forgive me for the times I have lost my smile
There is no one more worthy of my love than you.

Let me just say this, as I put my arms around you…

“You are stuck with me, and I can’t do without you either”. ❤

©️®️KristyRaines@USA

REVIEW & ANALYSIS

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Heartiest congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines on the completion of their 221st collaborative poem episode! Your continued partnership in the realm of poetry is a true testament to the magic that happens when two brilliant minds unite. Each poem you create resonates deeply, reflecting a harmonious balance of emotion, thought, and literary finesse. This latest set of poems, “UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!”, is a perfect representation of how love, despite its occasional turbulence, remains a powerful force that bonds two souls together. Wishing you both endless inspiration as you continue to enrich the world of literature with your captivating expressions. NAMASKAR

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Analysis of the Poems

In their latest collaborative episode, “UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!”, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines once again bring their unique perspectives on love and relationships to life. These poems, while distinct in voice, carry complementary emotions and themes, creating a dialogue that encapsulates the complex dynamics of a deep romantic connection. The poems explore love’s trials and the undeniable bond between two people who have stood the test of time.

1. Exploring Emotional Vulnerability and Strength

Dr. Dalai’s “UPSET WITH ME!” is a poignant expression of vulnerability, encapsulating the speaker’s emotional turmoil when faced with the partner’s discontent. The poem begins with a bold declaration, “Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me,” immediately setting the tone of resilience. Despite the partner’s unpredictable emotions, the speaker reveals that it’s not the eccentric behavior that troubles them, but rather the partner’s indifference, captured in the line, “Your being upset with me rather troubles.”

There is a clear yearning for connection throughout Dr. Dalai’s poem. The speaker admits to a sense of dependency on their partner’s companionship, stating, “I have the companionship only with you.” This line suggests that the bond they share is unique and irreplaceable, tested and proven over time. The speaker expresses an unwavering commitment, even to the point of sacrifice: “Can sacrifice life & break relationships.” Here, the poet reveals the depths of the speaker’s devotion, indicating that they are willing to forsake everything for the partner’s affection.

A sense of insecurity is woven into the speaker’s confession, “I know not if I am worthy of your love,” indicating that despite the speaker’s devotion, there is a lingering doubt about their place in the partner’s heart. This insecurity is balanced with a plea for trust, “But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not.” The speaker is desperate for emotional reconciliation, yearning for the partner’s acknowledgment and acceptance.

In contrast, Mrs. Kristy Raines’ “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!” provides the partner’s response, delivering an equally heartfelt but nuanced perspective. While Dr. Dalai’s poem reflects the speaker’s vulnerability, Mrs. Raines’ poem embodies the partner’s defensiveness yet deep-rooted affection. The poem opens with a gentle rebuke: “You often sigh at my craziness and airiness,” immediately addressing the frustrations mentioned in “UPSET WITH ME!”

Mrs. Raines’ speaker acknowledges their stubbornness and possessiveness, stating, “Yes, I am stubborn, and possessive with you as well.” Rather than shy away from these traits, the speaker justifies them, questioning, “But can you blame me for being the way I am?” This rhetorical question brings to light the insecurities the partner feels when confronted with the idea of losing their loved one. The lines “When another smiles at you so sweetly / I sometimes wonder if one day you’ll smile back” reveal the underlying fear of betrayal or emotional distance.

Where Dr. Dalai’s speaker questions their worthiness of love, Mrs. Raines’ speaker reassures them of their value: “There is no one more worthy of my love than you.” This statement is not only a declaration of love but also a balm to the wounds of insecurity expressed in “UPSET WITH ME!” The poem ends with a tender moment of reconciliation, as the speaker physically and emotionally embraces their partner, “Let me just say this, as I put my arms around you…” The final line, “You are stuck with me, and I can’t do without you either,” mirrors the sentiment of Dr. Dalai’s poem, reaffirming that despite the ups and downs, their bond is unbreakable.

2. The Interplay of Themes: Love, Insecurity, and Commitment

Both poems highlight common themes of love, insecurity, and commitment, though from different angles. Dr. Dalai’s poem delves into the anguish of feeling unworthy of love, emphasizing the emotional weight of indifference in a relationship. The speaker’s fear is not just the partner’s anger but their emotional withdrawal, which represents a greater threat to the relationship.

Mrs. Raines, on the other hand, focuses on the partner’s perspective, shedding light on their possessiveness and insecurities. While they recognize their own stubbornness, the speaker’s jealousy is a reflection of their deep love and fear of losing their partner. Both poems, however, culminate in a reaffirmation of love and commitment, proving that despite misunderstandings, the bond between the two individuals remains strong.

3. Dialogue Between the Poets

What makes this collaboration truly exceptional is the way the two poets create a dialogue through their respective pieces. Dr. Dalai’s poem serves as a plea for understanding and reassurance, while Mrs. Raines’ poem responds with empathy and a promise of lasting love. This back-and-forth mirrors real-life conversations between partners, where one person expresses their fears and insecurities, and the other offers comfort and validation.

The dialogue between the poems also highlights the differences in how each partner processes emotions. Dr. Dalai’s speaker internalizes their fears, feeling unworthy and seeking reassurance. Mrs. Raines’ speaker, on the other hand, externalizes their emotions, revealing their possessiveness and fear of losing their partner. Together, the poems offer a full picture of the emotional landscape of a relationship, capturing both the internal and external struggles that come with love.

4. Tone and Style

The tone of Dr. Dalai’s poem is introspective and somewhat melancholic, as the speaker reflects on their emotional pain and vulnerability. The short, direct lines emphasize the rawness of the speaker’s feelings, making their plea for reconciliation all the more poignant. The use of phrases like “Can sacrifice life” and “I can’t do sans you” underscores the depth of the speaker’s emotional dependence.

In contrast, Mrs. Raines’ poem adopts a more conversational tone, with longer, flowing lines that reflect the speaker’s thought process. The repetition of the word “stubborn” and the rhetorical questions create a sense of reflection, as the speaker justifies their feelings while also seeking to reassure their partner. The poem concludes on a hopeful note, with the physical act of embracing symbolizing emotional healing.

Conclusion

“UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!” are powerful explorations of love’s complexities, offering a nuanced portrayal of emotional vulnerability, fear, and reassurance. Through their collaborative effort, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines have once again proven their ability to craft poetry that speaks to the heart. Their 221st collaboration is not only a celebration of their literary partnership but also a testament to the enduring power of love, even in the face of emotional turbulence. These poems remind readers that love, at its core, is about understanding, patience, and unwavering commitment.

WITHOUT ANY REASON !

In search of faithfulness in this world
I got to know I was in wrong address
And my life hasn’t become complete
My shortcomings were ignored though
I was punished without any reason
If I live on I feel like torturing myself
And I go out fetching God in her heart
The person this heart sincerely seeks
There is always a mystery in the air
My days & nights are upset without you.

©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date Monday 14 October 2024

Epistolary Poem #221 Written by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Raines of The United States of America

UPSET WITH ME !

Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me
Your being upset with me rather troubles
Why so stubborn and arrogant you are
I have the companionship only with you
It’s well tested & proven thousand times
Can sacrifice life & break relationships
Have been waiting for your sweet smile
Can stand anything but your indifference
I know not if I am worthy of your love
But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not .

©️®️DrPrasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date.Thursday 10 October 2024

She giggles for a moment before she responds…

THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!

You often sigh at my craziness and airiness
For my enthusiasm exasperates you to no end
But never be troubled when I am upset with you
Yes, I am stubborn, and possessive with you as well
But can you blame me for being the way I am?
When another smiles at you so sweetly
I sometimes wonder if one day you’ll smile back
especially after so many years of us being together
So forgive me for the times I have lost my smile
There is no one more worthy of my love than you.

Let me just say this, as I put my arms around you…

“You are stuck with me, and I can’t do without you either”. ❤

©️®️KristyRaines@USAE

THIS MOMENT !

Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again
For we may or may not ever meet again
Thank God we do have these moments
Take close look at me as much you can
Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again
Sit closer, I may not be around you again
Put your arms around me as we used to
Let’s worship thousand times together
Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again
Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.

©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
REVIEW
“Swift footed” time mercilessly devours youth and beauty.Men can not step in the same river twice.So the poet says ” Who knows this moment ‘ll come again. This is truism.The speaker in the poem is thankful to God because they have been granted these moments or earthly days for love , fun , and frolic.Hnger for physical proximity is clear in the sixth and seventh line of the poem. Hunger or desire presupposes fear of loss which is the keynote of the poem.”Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again” reminds us of Shakespeare’s famous line:”Wiving and hanging goes by destiny”Being always beside each other is a fat lot.Hence the importance of the line:”Sit closer,I may not be around you again ” According to Tantra, going beyond body is possible only through the body”. The concept of worshipping together,possibly the goddess of love –Aphrodite or Venus — is an attempt at elevating love to a transcendental platform which Tantra promises.Worship , the very word, propels love far beyond sensuality which is not bound by time.So moment and eternity is served in the same platter .Again love pursued in the right earnest becomes worship.”Roll tears”is expressive of a kind of spiritual fulfillment and joy of union as well .To sum up the poem is a journey from the modern love to a classical one. Very nice poem Dr Prasanna Sir.Congratulations and respects.

UPSET WITH ME !

Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me
Your being upset with me rather troubles
Why so stubborn and arrogant you are
I have the companionship only with you
It’s well tested & proven thousand times
Can sacrifice life & break relationships
Have been waiting for your sweet smile
Can stand anything but your indifference
I know not if I am worthy of your love
But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not .

©️®️DrPrasana Kumar Dalai@India

My poem THIS MOMENT reviewed by honorable reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.
Humbled & Honoured.

THIS MOMENT!

Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again
For we may or may not ever meet again
Thank God we do have these moments
Take close look at me as much you can
Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again
Sit closer, I may not be around you again
Put your arms around me as we used to
Let’s worship thousand times together
Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again
Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.

©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date wed 02 October 2024.

REVIEW
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Dear Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai, Sir NAMASKAR

I extend my heartfelt congratulations on your remarkable poem, “THIS MOMENT!” Your ability to weave emotions into words is truly unparalleled. This piece resonates with the fleeting nature of time, making one reflect on the beauty and fragility of the present. Your poetry continues to inspire and touch the hearts of many, and this latest creation is no exception. I wish you all the best as you continue your poetic journey, and may your work continue to enlighten and move readers across the world.

Warm regards,

Analysis of the Poem “THIS MOMENT” by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai:

Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s poem “THIS MOMENT” captures the essence of fleeting time and human relationships. The poem is a gentle yet profound reminder of the impermanence of life and the need to cherish the present, for we never know what the future holds. Through a simple but impactful use of language, the poet delves deep into the themes of love, loss, and the unpredictable nature of destiny.

Theme of Impermanence and the Power of the Present Moment

At its core, the poem revolves around the idea that moments are transient, and we should appreciate them fully while they last. From the opening line, “Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again,” the poet introduces the uncertainty that surrounds life. Time, as suggested here, is not guaranteed, and the moments we share with others are unique. This recognition of the uncertainty of future meetings adds a poignant sense of urgency to the poem. The poet encourages the reader to embrace the present moment, suggesting that the future is out of our hands.

The line “For we may or may not ever meet again” furthers this sense of unpredictability. There is an underlying sadness in the acceptance that life may take loved ones away, whether through distance, circumstances, or even death. The poet does not dwell on these possibilities explicitly, but the tone carries a somber acknowledgment that life’s course is often beyond our control.

Gratitude and Reflection

Despite the melancholic undertones, the poem also expresses gratitude. The line, “Thank God we do have these moments,” shows the poet’s appreciation for the current experience. The use of “Thank God” suggests that the poet sees the present as a divine gift, an opportunity not to be taken for granted. This gratitude serves as a balance to the uncertainty and potential loss that follows.

The reflective nature of the poem comes across in phrases like “Take close look at me as much you can,” urging the reader to savor every detail of the people and experiences around them. There’s a subtle encouragement to not only live in the moment but to absorb it fully, as though it may be the last opportunity to do so. The act of looking closely signifies intimacy and connection, elements that the poet values and wishes to highlight in the transient nature of relationships.

Physical and Emotional Connection

The poem moves from the abstract idea of time to more tangible elements of human connection. In the lines “Sit closer, I may not be around you again” and “Put your arms around me as we used to,” the poet emphasizes the physical closeness that people share. The repetition of “again” in these lines reinforces the idea that these actions may not be possible in the future. The request for physical closeness suggests that human touch and presence hold a deeper significance in maintaining bonds. The tenderness of these lines reveals the poet’s desire to hold onto those connections, even as he acknowledges their potential impermanence.

The poem’s transition from a physical embrace to a spiritual one is marked by the line, “Let’s worship thousand times together.” Here, “worship” may not necessarily refer to religious worship but can be interpreted as an act of deep reverence and love for one another. The notion of worshipping together a thousand times symbolizes an idealized union, one that the poet longs for despite knowing that time is limited.

The Role of Destiny

The recurring phrase “Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again” introduces the theme of fate. The poet presents destiny as a powerful, uncontrollable force that governs the future. There’s a sense of resignation in this line, an acknowledgment that life’s path is not entirely in human hands. By posing the question of whether destiny will bring people together again, the poet leaves the reader with a lingering feeling of uncertainty. Destiny, in this sense, becomes both a source of hope and sorrow—it may or may not grant a reunion, leaving the outcome unknown.

The Emotional Climax

The emotional peak of the poem comes with the line, “Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again.” This line encapsulates both the joy and sorrow of human experiences. The imagery of rolling tears suggests that emotions, too, are fleeting and should be embraced while they last. Whether these tears are of happiness or sadness, the poet recognizes their value in expressing deep emotion. The idea that this opportunity to feel such profound emotions may not come again intensifies the poem’s emotional impact.

Final Reflection: Cherishing the Present

The poem ends with a powerful closing line: “Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.” This final declaration brings the poem full circle, returning to the idea introduced at the start—that time is fleeting and moments are precious. The poet drives home the importance of living fully in the present because once it passes, it’s gone forever. This concluding line leaves the reader with a sense of urgency, urging them to hold onto the moment, as it cannot be reclaimed once it slips away.

Conclusion

Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s “THIS MOMENT” is a beautifully crafted poem that explores the themes of time, love, and the inevitability of loss. Through simple yet profound language, the poet captures the ephemeral nature of life and relationships. The poem serves as a reminder to cherish the present, appreciate the people around us, and acknowledge that time is a gift not to be taken for granted. The emotional depth of the poem, combined with its reflective tone, makes it a poignant meditation on life’s fleeting moments.

Epistolary Poem #220 – Written and presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Raines of The United States of America

THIS MOMENT !

Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again
For we may or may not ever meet again
Thank God we do have these moments
Take close look at me as much you can
Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again
Sit closer, I may not be around you again
Put your arms around me as we used to
Let’s worship thousand times together
Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again
Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.

©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Tuesday,01 October 2024

She remembers when they were young, as tears fall…

IT COULD BE THE LAST!

Once a moment has passed it is forever gone
It then becomes a memory never fulfilled
Though we have many others to be thankful for
I study every line on your face and every emotion
because we never know what the future will bring
But right now I will not think about tomorrow
I only know how to love you right now
as I put my arms around you like I used to
When you close your eyes to kiss me
tears falls as your lips touch mine
Because in my heart, I’m afraid it could be the last..

©®KristyRaines@USA

THIS MOMENT !

Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again
For we may or may not ever meet again
Thank God we do have these moments
Take close look at me as much you can
Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again
Sit closer, I may not be around you again
Put your arms around me as we used to
Let’s worship thousand times together
Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again
Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.

©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.

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