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Epistolary poem #225 Presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
THE TALK OF THE TOWN !
My morning has already come smiling
New dreams even with eyes wide open
An indication that happiness is lurking
Radiant morning and uplifting breeze
Being drenched, she runs into my arms
An angel with lovely tune of her anklets
The talk of the town is soft and smooth
Though old, fresh seem conversations
Beyond all thoughts this life moves on
I am a bud blooming at your first sight
Find myself dissolved in thy love genuine
And I would love to find my muse in you.
©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India
Date Monday 11 November 2024

Our love never changes….
DRENCHED IN THE MOMENT!

He smiles as I run to his open arms
Like a dream, everything is going in slow motion
The morning is bright and the breeze cool
The only sound is the jingling of my anklets
and I am drenched in this moment of bliss
as My Love pulls me closer to him
I feel his warm and tender embrace
Though we have lived many years together
our conversations together are new everyday
Life with you is always an adventure
and the talk of the town we may be
But I love you more today than when we met
The way you look at me is with hunger
And I would love to be your inspiration forever…

©️®️KristyRaines@USA

ANALYSIS
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Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines for crafting yet another beautiful and heartfelt epistolary poem, “The Talk of the Town!” This 225th poetic collaboration adds a new dimension to your already rich partnership, bringing together cultures, emotions, and poetic voices from India and the USA. The poems evoke an intimate bond between two souls, capturing love that matures and deepens over time, yet feels as fresh as a morning breeze. This cross-cultural, evocative exchange celebrates enduring romance, making it the perfect talk of the town!

Complete Analysis

The two epistolary poems—”THE TALK OF THE TOWN” by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and “DRENCHED IN THE MOMENT” by Kristy Raines—showcase a beautifully crafted exchange between lovers, each expressing their affection and appreciation for one another from their unique perspectives. This pair of poems continues their epistolary tradition, where each poet’s verse is a response to the other’s, revealing their love story in rich detail and layered with powerful imagery. Despite the distance between the poets’ backgrounds and the geographical gap, their words seamlessly bridge these boundaries, symbolizing the universal nature of love.

Imagery and Symbolism

Both poems use nature as a setting and metaphor for the beauty and purity of the couple’s bond. In “THE TALK OF THE TOWN,” Dr. Dalai opens with “My morning has already come smiling,” setting a tone of joy and optimism. The morning, often symbolic of new beginnings, represents the freshness that the poet still feels in his relationship despite its maturity. His mention of a “Radiant morning and uplifting breeze” signals a rejuvenating love that adds vitality to his life. The line “An angel with lovely tune of her anklets” adds a personal, cultural touch, evoking traditional Indian imagery where anklets are both ornamental and symbolic of grace, femininity, and affection.

Kristy Raines, in “DRENCHED IN THE MOMENT,” mirrors this nature-based sentiment by describing a morning that is “bright and the breeze cool.” She complements Dr. Dalai’s sentiments, reflecting their shared environment, and amplifies the sense of serenity and calmness around their love. Her mention of “the jingling of my anklets” harmonizes with Dr. Dalai’s cultural reference, bridging their love across borders and emphasizing their connection. This duality of nature and cultural symbolism gives readers a universal picture of love, enhanced by personal and intimate details from each poet’s perspective.

Tone and Mood

The tone in both poems is warm, tender, and nostalgic. Dr. Dalai’s verse carries a touch of marvel and deep affection, as he speaks of love with both awe and comfort. His expression of “I am a bud blooming at your first sight” encapsulates a kind of innocent freshness, symbolizing his enduring excitement for his beloved. Despite the passage of time, he remains captivated by his partner’s presence.

Kristy Raines’ response echoes this sentiment with profound love and gratitude. Her line “Though we have lived many years together, our conversations together are new everyday” speaks to the freshness that keeps their relationship alive and ever-evolving. She compares life with her partner to an “adventure,” suggesting a spirited relationship, full of curiosity and mutual discovery. The mood throughout both poems is deeply affectionate and anchored in a sense of timeless love.

Structure and Literary Techniques

Both poets employ free verse, allowing their thoughts and feelings to flow naturally. This choice of structure mirrors the organic, evolving nature of their relationship. Without the constraints of rhyme or meter, each line flows as though it were a conversation, reflecting the intimate, unscripted exchanges between two people in love.

Imagery plays a key role in the verses, particularly in Dr. Dalai’s use of “blooming bud” and “first sight,” which brings to mind the early stages of romance, imbued with curiosity and the joy of discovery. His line “Beyond all thoughts this life moves on” hints at the eternal nature of love that transcends everyday concerns.

Kristy, on the other hand, uses phrases like “drenched in this moment of bliss,” which evoke a tangible sense of being enveloped in happiness. Her expressions—”I feel his warm and tender embrace,” “Life with you is always an adventure,” and “I love you more today than when we met”—enhance the poem’s personal feel, showing her adoration for her partner. Her verse is filled with sensory details that draw the reader into her emotional experience.

Theme and Message

The overarching theme of the poem pair is enduring love, portrayed as both romantic and spiritual. Despite the years, their love feels new every day, a theme encapsulated in lines like “our conversations together are new everyday” and “I am a bud blooming at your first sight.” Both poets highlight the sense of wonder and renewal that characterizes a deep, committed love, one that grows richer with time.

Through their respective verses, Dr. Dalai and Kristy convey a sense of mutual inspiration. Dr. Dalai speaks of wanting to “find my muse in you,” while Kristy ends with “I would love you to be your inspiration forever.” This mutual muse-seeking illustrates a relationship where each partner is enriched and elevated by the other, suggesting that true love is reciprocal, both individuals finding fulfillment and growth through their bond.

Another underlying message is that of unity despite differences. The collaboration itself symbolizes a beautiful merging of cultures, where both poets celebrate each other’s customs and traditions. Kristy’s reference to the jingling anklets, traditionally Indian, shows her admiration and embrace of her partner’s cultural symbols. This unity in diversity reflects love’s ability to transcend barriers, making it universally relatable.

Cultural and Cross-Border Connection

An outstanding element of this poetic collaboration is its cross-cultural aspect. Dr. Dalai and Kristy, hailing from different countries and traditions, bring a rich fusion of Indian and Western imagery. Dr. Dalai’s verse, with references to blooming buds and anklets, carries the elegance and charm of Indian culture. Kristy, in turn, resonates with this cultural symbolism and reflects it in her own verse, demonstrating her respect and acceptance of her partner’s traditions.

This merging of cultures creates an implicit message: love knows no borders, nationalities, or cultural restrictions. By weaving in each other’s cultural symbols and references, the poets show readers that love is a language understood by all, and it grows richer when it embraces diversity. Through these poems, they become the talk of the town not only because of their bond but also because of the bridge they build between two distinct cultures.

Conclusion

“The Talk of the Town!” is a testimony to the power of love that matures yet remains eternally fresh. Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines capture the joys and depths of an enduring relationship that transcends both time and cultural boundaries. Their exchange demonstrates that love, when nurtured, retains its youthful vitality and wonder, no matter how long the journey. The poets’ choice of themes, imagery, and structure creates a shared vision that speaks to the hearts of readers worldwide, making this poem a timeless expression of affection.

Through “The Talk of the Town!” and “Drenched in the Moment,” Dr. Dalai and Kristy Raines provide readers with not only a poetic experience but also a window into a love that honors both individuality and unity. Their journey together, poetically documented, stands as an inspiring testament to love’s power to thrive across all differences, a love that truly deserves to be celebrated as the talk of the town.

LET ME HOLD !

You will come and meet me somewhere
Give me dreams by asking questions
Otherwise I keep doing useless things
I do always have to pass by your side
Tell me that you will remain the same
I am waiting all time chanting your name
I find my peace, pain and love in you
Let me hold it so tight lest it should slip
Time is flying by and we’re so helpless
You’re my passion I always cherish high.

©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date 10 Sunday November 2024

Epistolary poem #225 Presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Raines of The United States of America

THE TALK OF THE TOWN !

My morning has already come smiling
New dreams even with eyes wide open
An indication that happiness is lurking
Radiant morning and uplifting breeze
Being drenched, she runs into my arms
An angel with lovely tune of her anklets
The talk of the town is soft and smooth
Though old, fresh seem conversations
Beyond all thoughts this life moves on
I am a bud blooming at your first sight
Find myself dissolved in thy love genuine
And I would love to find my muse in you.

©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India
Date Friday 08 November 2024

Our love never changes….

DRENCHED IN THE MOMENT!

He smiles as I run to his open arms
Like a dream, everything is going in slow motion
The morning is bright and the breeze cool
The only sound is the jingling of my anklets
and I am drenched in this moment of bliss
as My Love pulls me closer to him
I feel his warm and tender embrace
Though we have lived many years together
our conversations together are new everyday
Life with you is always an adventure
and the talk of the town we may be
But I love you more today than when we met
The way you look at me is with hunger
And I would love you to be your inspiration forever…

©️®️KristyRaines@USA — with Kristy Raines.

My poem THE TALK OF THE TOWN reviewed by eminent reviewer retired Prof Dr Nirakar Dash of Department of English Assam Government.

Humbled & Honoured.

THE TALK OF THE TOWN !

My morning has already come smiling
New dreams even with eyes wide open
An indication that happiness is lurking
Radiant morning and uplifting breeze
Being drenched, she runs into my arms
An angel with lovely tune of her anklets
The talk of the town is soft and smooth
Though old, fresh seem conversations
Beyond all thoughts this life moves on
I am a bud blooming at your first sight
Find myself dissolved in thy love genuine
And I would love to find my muse in you.

©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India
Date Thursday 07 November 2024.

REVIEW
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Now a days the poet is in a jocund mood suggested by the figurative “smiling morning”.He is looking forward to his sunny days with his beloved.The joy of the unexpected hug she gave him is expressed through:”Radiant morning and uplifting breeze”. Painting her as an angel with jingling “anklets” lends an air of supernaturality to her.Previously the people around them were somewhat critical and unfriendly towards them — he and his love.But with time, they, the “town”here in poet’s language,are “soft and smooth “, indicating neither enmity from other suitors nor any social opposition.”Though old,fresh seem conversation”– is a prominent line because it means,to put in Shakespeare’s words, love,”Looks with the mind,not with the eyes”The poet’s life moves on unhindered even with all struggles.His feeling of love, metaphorically expressed in the tenth line,is a love at first sight.As it is genuine,it would Kindle hopes and inspirations in the the poet to write more love poems like this.The word “dissolved” ,being a chemical one, stand for a complete disappearance of the physical ego of the poet and a unworldly unification with his love.The poem is outstanding in nature,Dr Prasanna Sir.Congratulations and my regards.

Prof Dr Nirakar Dash@ India

My poem THE TALK OF THE TOWN reviewed by eminent reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.

Humbled & Honoured.

THE TALK OF THE TOWN !

My morning has already come smiling
New dreams even with eyes wide open
An indication that happiness is lurking
Radiant morning and uplifting breeze
Being drenched, she runs into my arms
An angel with lovely tune of her anklets
The talk of the town is soft and smooth
Though old, fresh seem conversations
Beyond all thoughts this life moves on
I am a bud blooming at your first sight
Find myself dissolved in thy love genuine
And I would love to find my muse in you.

©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India
Date. 06 Wednesday November 2024

REVIEW *
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Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai Sir on his latest poetic creation, The Talk of the Town! This beautiful work radiates warmth, capturing a moment of deep connection and the joy that blossoms from love. The poem opens with a sense of hope as morning arrives with a smile, evoking optimism and readiness for new dreams. Dr. Dalai’s use of sensory imagery, particularly through the “radiant morning” and “uplifting breeze,” creates an atmosphere filled with vibrancy and anticipation, bringing the reader into a moment of refreshing renewal.

One of the most enchanting elements of this poem is the depiction of a beloved figure who “runs into [his] arms” with “the lovely tune of her anklets.” Here, Dr. Dalai masterfully evokes the image of an angelic presence, suggesting that the lover brings a divine, almost celestial joy. His phrasing, such as “the talk of the town,” hints at how their love is cherished and admired by those around them, making it a shared celebration within the community.

Dr. Dalai’s words “I am a bud blooming at your first sight” beautifully portray the transformative power of love, akin to a flower awakening. His imagery of “finding [his] muse” in the beloved adds a personal touch, illustrating how this connection fuels his creativity. The concluding line, “I would love to find my muse in you,” reinforces the poet’s yearning to experience life’s beauty through his partner’s presence, presenting love as both a foundation and a source of inspiration.

Once again, heartfelt congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai for crafting such a tender and profound piece that resonates with universal emotions and leaves a lasting impression on its readers.

Reviewed by

Raj Kishor Patnaik @India

Biography of the Author.

DrPrasana Kumar Dalai
(DOB 07/06/1973) is a passionate Indian Author-cum- bilingual poet while a tremendous lecturer of English by profession in the Ganjam district of Odisha.He is an accomplished source of inspiration for young generation of India .His free verse on Romantic and melancholic poems appreciated by everyone. He belongs to a small typical village Nandiagada of Ganjam District,the state of Odisha.After schooling he studied intermediate and Graduated In Kabisurjya Baladev vigyan Mahavidyalaya then M A in English from Berhampur University PhD in language and literature and D.litt from Colombian poetic house from South America.He promotes his specific writings around the world literature and trades with multiple stems that are related to current issues based on his observation and experiences that needs urgent attention.He is an award winning writer who has achieved various laurels from the circle of writing worldwide.His free verse poems not only inspires young readers but also the ready of current time.His poetic symbol is right now inspiring others, some of which are appreciated by laurels of India and across the world. Many of his poems been translated in different Indian languages and got global appreciation. Lots of well wishes for his upcoming writtings and success in future.He is an award winning poet author of many best seller books.Recently he is awarded Rabindra nath Tagore and Gujarat Sahitya Academy for the year 2022 from Motivational Strips . A gold medal from world union of poets France & winner Of Rahim Karims world literary prize 2023.The government of Odisha Higher Education Department appointed him
as a president to Governing body of Padmashree Dr Ghanashyam Mishra Sanskrit Degree College, Kabisurjyanagar.Winner of ” HYPERPOEM ” GUNIESS WORLD RECORD 2023.Recently he was awarded from SABDA literary Festival at Assam.Highest literary honour from Peru contributing world literature 2024.Prestigious Cesar Vellejo award 2024 & Highest literary honour from Peru.Director at Samrat Educational charitable Trust Berhampur, Ganjam Odisha.
Vicedomini of world union of poets Italy.
Completed 225 Epistolary poetry with Kristy Raines U SA.
Books.
1.Psalm of the Soul.
2.Rise of New Dawn.
3.secret Of Torment.
4.Everything I never told you.
5.Vision Of Life National Library Kolkata.
6.100 Shadows of Dream.
7.Timeless Anguish.
8.Voice of Silence.
9.I cross my heart from east to west . Epistolary poetry with Kristy Raines

My odia poem Bishada ra Kalima translated by eminent reviewer and translator Raj Kishor Pattnaik
Humbled & Honoured.

ବିଷାଦ ର କାଳିମା!

ତୁମ ସ୍ବପ୍ନ ଠାରୁ ମତେ ଦୁରେଇ
ମୂଁ ଜାଣେନି ଭଗବାନ ଠିକଣା
ମୂଁ ମୋ ନିଜରେ ନିଜକୁ ଖୋଜେ
ମୋ ଆତ୍ମା ବି ମୋ ଠୁ ବହୁ ଦୂରରେ
ଆଜି ମୁଁ ପଥ ଭ୍ରଷ୍ଟ ପଥିକ
ହୃଦୟ ଆଊ ହୃଦୟର ସ୍ପନ୍ଦନ ବିଛିର୍ନ
ନିଶ୍ୱାସ ତ ଚାଲିଛି କିନ୍ତୁ ଭାଗ୍ୟ ଏବେ ବାଲିଘର ପରି
ନୂଆ କାହାଣୀ ଲେଖିବା ପାଇଁ ସ୍ୟାହି ବି ଅଭିମାନ କରୁଛି
ବୋଧେ ବିଧିର ବିଧାନ
ଭଗବାନଙ୍କ ନିଷ୍ପତ୍ତି କୁ ମୁଁ ସାମ୍ନା କରି ପାରୁନି!

©️®️ଡ଼କ୍ଟର ପ୍ରସନ୍ନ କୁମାର ଦଳାଇ
କବିସୂର୍ଯ୍ୟନଗର
ଗଞ୍ଜାମ

Translated by Raj Kishore Patnnaik

The Darkness of Despair

Drifting away from dreams of you,
I wander, lost, without a divine guide,
Seeking myself within the depths of my own being,
Yet my soul feels distant, severed from my essence.
Today, I am a traveler astray,
Where heart and its rhythm lie broken, divided.
Though breath sustains, fate crumbles like sandcastles,
Even ink hesitates, unwilling to pen new tales.
Perhaps this is destiny’s decree,
A judgment from God I struggle to face.

— Dr. Prasanna Kumar Dalai
Kabisuryanagar, Ganjam