MARK OF BLEMISH !

We will flow in the air , cloud and rain
As you’re my rain and I’m your cloud
If I’m not yours,I won’t be anyone else’s
Know not why the world is jealous of us
It’s not mark of blemish but kohl of love
An illness in accordance to this world
But the ones in love know it as divinity
The twist of love and life has brought us
I’m deep darkness and you’re my dawn
A lost traveller, I’m yours and you’re mine
It may be infatuation if love is one-sided
But ours is love for each other , isn’t it ?

©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India
Date. Sunday 26 October 2024

Biography of the Author.

DrPrasana Kumar Dalai
(DOB 07/06/1973) is a passionate Indian Author-cum- bilingual poet while a tremendous lecturer of English by profession in the Ganjam district of Odisha.He is an accomplished source of inspiration for young generation of India .His free verse on Romantic and melancholic poems appreciated by everyone. He belongs to a small typical village Nandiagada of Ganjam District,the state of Odisha.After schooling he studied intermediate and Graduated In Kabisurjya Baladev vigyan Mahavidyalaya then M A in English from Berhampur University PhD in language and literature and D.litt from Colombian poetic house from South America.He promotes his specific writings around the world literature and trades with multiple stems that are related to current issues based on his observation and experiences that needs urgent attention.He is an award winning writer who has achieved various laurels from the circle of writing worldwide.His free verse poems not only inspires young readers but also the ready of current time.His poetic symbol is right now inspiring others, some of which are appreciated by laurels of India and across the world. Many of his poems been translated in different Indian languages and got global appreciation. Lots of well wishes for his upcoming writtings and success in future.He is an award winning poet author of many best seller books.Recently he is awarded Rabindra nath Tagore and Gujarat Sahitya Academy for the year 2022 from Motivational Strips . A gold medal from world union of poets France & winner Of Rahim Karims world literary prize 2023.The government of Odisha Higher Education Department appointed him
as a president to Governing body of Padmashree Dr Ghanashyam Mishra Sanskrit Degree College, Kabisurjyanagar.Winner of ” HYPERPOEM ” GUNIESS WORLD RECORD 2023.Recently he was awarded from SABDA literary Festival at Assam.Highest literary honour from Peru contributing world literature 2024.Prestigious Cesar Vellejo award 2024 & Highest literary honour from Peru.Director at Samrat Educational charitable Trust Berhampur, Ganjam Odisha.
Completed 221 Epistolary poetry with Kristy Raines U SA.
Books.
1.Psalm of the Soul.
2.Rise of New Dawn.
3.secret Of Torment.
4.Everything I never told you.
5.Vision Of Life National Library Kolkata.
6.100 Shadows of Dream.
7.Timeless Anguish.
8.Voice of Silence.
9.I cross my heart from east to west . Epistolary poetry with Kristy Raines

Eminent odia poet Hemanta Kumar Gantayats poem translated by me

My poem SLIGHT IMPRESSION reviewed by honourable Retired Prof Dr Nirakar Dash of Assam government and analysed by honourable analyst Raj Kishor Pattnaik.
Humbled & Honoured.

SLIGHT IMPRESSION !

You came to my world and disappeared Next moment ; I thought several times
That first look with a slight impression
Why does it make my heart so restless
Your smiling back with sweet glances
I don’t know what you are waiting for
Am I the one whom you trust so much
Why I have this feeling time and again
The buds of rosy lips have blossomed
Is it due to the passion of your heart ?

©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India
Date.Wednesday 23 October 2024.

REVIEW
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The speaker’s sudden encounter with a girl who made a hasty disappearance without a lingering conversation has etched a great impression on his mind.The impression is not “slight” as mentioned in the poem,for a negligible emoton can not give rise to a poem of this kind which is universally applicable.As the first impression lasts long, the speaker is too powerless to delete it.He says:”I thought several times that first look with a slight impression”Her sweet glances make him restless in anticipation of a psychological immediacy.This restlessness is reiterated in the line:”I don’t know what you are waiting for”.His inability to read her mind, which he tries to do,is clearly pronounced when he asks:”Am I the one who you trust so much”. Moreover,this also reveals the feeling of inadequacy that troubles him.The last two lines are riveting in asmuch as they show desires and conflicts in the mental landscape.Very smashing poem,Dr Prasanna Sir. Congratulations and regards.

ANALYSIS
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Nirakar Dash Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai for crafting yet another beautiful and thought-provoking poem, “Slight Impression!” It is a testament to your incredible ability to capture delicate emotions and fleeting moments in such a way that they resonate deeply with readers. Equally, congratulations to Prof. Nirakara Dash for providing a rich, insightful review that sheds light on the subtle nuances of the poem. Your review truly complements the work and allows readers to gain a deeper understanding of its emotional depth.

Analysis of the Poem

Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s “Slight Impression!” is a poem that encapsulates the complex emotions triggered by a brief yet impactful encounter. The speaker in the poem experiences an unexpected and fleeting moment with someone whose presence leaves a lasting impression. This impression, although described as “slight,” is paradoxically so profound that it compels the speaker to repeatedly reflect on it, making the emotional weight of the experience anything but light.

The poem begins with the speaker acknowledging the fleeting nature of the encounter: “You came to my world and disappeared / Next moment.” This sets the tone for the rest of the poem, where the speaker is left grappling with the emotional aftermath of a brief but deeply stirring interaction. The phrase “I thought several times / That first look with a slight impression” reveals the speaker’s attempt to rationalize or understand why this particular moment has left such a significant mark. Despite describing the impression as “slight,” the speaker’s inability to let go of the memory implies that the impact is, in fact, far more profound than they are willing to admit.

The recurring restlessness that the speaker feels is captured in the lines: “Why does it make my heart so restless / Your smiling back with sweet glances.” Here, the speaker is both puzzled and captivated by the subtle cues—the smiles and glances—that suggest a deeper connection or unspoken communication. The tension between what is felt and what is understood is palpable, as the speaker oscillates between uncertainty and longing.

The poem further delves into the speaker’s internal conflict with the lines: “Am I the one whom you trust so much / Why I have this feeling time and again.” These questions highlight the speaker’s vulnerability and insecurity, as they are unsure of their place in the other person’s thoughts or emotions. The speaker’s repeated questioning suggests an inner turmoil, as they struggle to decipher the meaning behind the encounter.

In the final lines, the poem introduces a sense of blossoming desire: “The buds of rosy lips have blossomed / Is it due to the passion of your heart?” These lines suggest that the encounter has awakened feelings of passion and desire, both in the speaker and, perhaps, in the other person. The imagery of blossoming lips evokes the idea of emotional and physical awakening, hinting at the possibility of unspoken attraction or love. The poem, thus, ends on a note of unresolved tension, leaving the reader to ponder the future of this fleeting yet powerful connection.

Analysis of the Review by Prof. Nirakara Dash

Prof. Nirakara Dash’s review provides a thoughtful and nuanced interpretation of Dr. Dalai’s poem. The reviewer begins by noting that the impression left on the speaker is not truly “slight,” despite the poem’s title and initial framing. As Prof. Dash astutely observes, a “negligible emotion” could not possibly give rise to a poem of such intensity and universal applicability. This observation sets the tone for the rest of the review, as the professor unpacks the deeper emotional undercurrents that run through the poem.

One of the key insights in Prof. Dash’s review is the speaker’s “powerlessness” in deleting the memory of the encounter. This inability to move on from the experience, despite its brevity, reflects the profound psychological impact that first impressions can have on an individual. As Prof. Dash points out, the restlessness experienced by the speaker is a manifestation of their anticipation and desire for emotional immediacy.

Prof. Dash also highlights the speaker’s struggle to read the other person’s mind, which is evident in the line: “Am I the one whom you trust so much.” This question, according to the review, reveals the speaker’s feelings of inadequacy and self-doubt, as they are unsure of their role in the other person’s thoughts or emotions. The review effectively captures the emotional complexity of this moment, underscoring the speaker’s internal conflict and vulnerability.

Finally, Prof. Dash draws attention to the final two lines of the poem, noting that they are “riveting” in their portrayal of desires and conflicts. The review concludes by praising the poem as a “smashing” work, a testament to Dr. Dalai’s skill as a poet.

Conclusion

In summary, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s “Slight Impression!” is a beautifully crafted poem that explores the emotional aftermath of a fleeting encounter. Through subtle imagery and probing questions, the poem captures the speaker’s inner turmoil and longing for connection. Prof. Nirakara Dash’s review enhances the reader’s understanding of the poem, offering keen insights into the speaker’s emotional landscape. Together, the poem and review form a compelling narrative about the power of first impressions and the complexities of human desire. Congratulations once again to both Dr. Dalai and Prof. Dash for their exceptional work!

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Our epistolary collaboration no # 222 analysed by honourable reviewer and analyst Raj Kishor Pattnaik

Humbled & Honoured.

Epistolary Poem #222 Written and Presented by DrPrasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Raines of The United States of America

WITHOUT ANY REASON !

In search of faithfulness in this world
I got to know I was in wrong address
And my life hasn’t become complete
My shortcomings were ignored though
I was punished without any reason
If I live on I feel like torturing myself
And I go out fetching God in her heart
The person this heart sincerely seeks
There is always a mystery in the air
My days & nights are upset without you.

©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date.Tuesday 22 October 2024

She hopes one day her dream will come true…

THAT MISSING PIECE!

In search of love in this big world
I never could find my missing piece
The part that brought true happiness
But then came a day that I stopped looking
never thinking that I deserved it
I prayed everyday for that missing piece
that would finally complete this empty heart
I can see you in my dreams when I sleep
I can even feel you touch my cheek
But, when I wake, you disappear once again
Perhaps one day you will find me instead
so I won’t have to wait each night just to meet you.

©️®️KristyRaines@USA

ANALYSIS
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Dear Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines,

It is with great admiration and joy that I extend my heartfelt congratulations to both of you for the beautiful, evocative poems “Without Any Reason!” by Dr. Dalai and “That Missing Piece!” by Mrs. Raines. Both poems reflect the profound depth of human emotion, where the eternal quest for love and faithfulness, two of the most fundamental desires of the heart, emerges as the central theme. Your works complement each other wonderfully, resonating with the shared longing and melancholy that weave together threads of yearning, hope, and introspection.

Both poems, though written from unique perspectives, have an unmistakable synergy in their emotional core and poetic tone, merging beautifully into an exquisite harmony. Please allow me to offer a thorough analysis of each poem and their collective beauty, highlighting the intricate layers of meaning and emotions embedded within them.

Without Any Reason! by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai

Dr. Dalai’s poem “Without Any Reason!” encapsulates the deep, inherent longing of the human spirit as it traverses the complicated landscape of love and faithfulness. The opening line, “In search of faithfulness in this world,” sets the melancholic tone of the poem, drawing readers into the poet’s journey for something that seems elusive — genuine faithfulness in a world that often disappoints. The metaphor of the “wrong address” serves as a powerful symbol, suggesting that the poet has knocked on many doors in life, only to find that faithfulness and true companionship were not to be found there.

The phrase “My shortcomings were ignored though / I was punished without any reason” conveys the inherent unfairness and unpredictability of life. Here, Dr. Dalai delves into the notion of undeserved suffering, a theme that echoes in the hearts of many who feel they are unjustly punished despite their sincere efforts to navigate the world with honesty. This reflection speaks not only to personal experience but also to the universal human condition, where the search for meaning and love often results in pain and disillusionment.

The central paradox of the poem emerges in the lines, “If I live on I feel like torturing myself / And I go out fetching God in her heart.” Here, the poet juxtaposes the idea of life being synonymous with self-torture, as he struggles under the weight of unfulfilled love. The search for divinity within the beloved’s heart suggests a profound spiritual longing — the belief that the beloved holds the key to transcendence or divine connection. The notion of “fetching God in her heart” offers a glimpse into the poet’s desire to find something sacred in the mundane, to elevate love into something more than just human connection — perhaps a pathway to the divine.

The closing lines, “The person this heart sincerely seeks / There is always a mystery in the air / My days & nights are upset without you,” leaves the reader with a lingering sense of yearning. The mystery in the air represents the intangible, the unknown element in love that eludes understanding and fulfillment. This unresolved tension between the heart’s desire and the enigmatic nature of life and love is what makes Dr. Dalai’s poem so poignant and relatable.

That Missing Piece! by Kristy Raines

Mrs. Raines’s “That Missing Piece!” echoes a similar sentiment, one of deep yearning and introspection, but approaches the theme of love from a slightly different angle. The poem opens with the speaker admitting the futility of her quest: “In search of love in this big world / I never could find my missing piece.” The metaphor of the “missing piece” brilliantly captures the essence of incompleteness that so often accompanies the pursuit of love. This missing piece symbolizes not only a romantic partner but also the fulfillment of the speaker’s soul, an emotional and spiritual wholeness that remains elusive.

The phrase “The part that brought true happiness” alludes to the belief that true happiness cannot be found within oneself but must be discovered through another person. However, the poet acknowledges the bitter irony that, despite her search, she could not find this happiness, which leads her to the heart-wrenching realization: “But then came a day that I stopped looking / never thinking that I deserved it.” These lines are particularly moving, as they touch upon a theme of self-worth, suggesting that the speaker’s sense of unworthiness becomes the barrier to finding the love she so deeply craves.

The theme of prayer emerges in the line, “I prayed every day for that missing piece,” signaling the poet’s deep faith and hope that one day, the void in her heart will be filled. This religious undertone mirrors the spiritual search found in Dr. Dalai’s poem, where the longing for love transcends the physical and ventures into the realm of the divine. Both poets seem to grapple with the idea that love and faithfulness are intertwined with their personal spirituality, yet both remain just out of reach.

In the lines “I can see you in my dreams when I sleep / I can even feel you touch my cheek,” Mrs. Raines beautifully describes the ethereal quality of love that exists in dreams but fades upon waking. The contrast between dream and reality is a central theme here — the speaker’s lover exists in the dream world, where everything feels real and tangible, but once she wakes, the dream slips away. The tactile image of “feel[ing] you touch my cheek” is particularly powerful, emphasizing the physical absence of the lover in the waking world, while his presence is palpable in the dream realm.

The closing lines, “Perhaps one day you will find me instead / so I won’t have to wait each night just to meet you,” underscore the poet’s fatigue in her nightly ritual of waiting. This final plea for the lover to find her suggests a shift in agency, from the speaker’s search to a passive hope that the lover will come to her — a poignant reflection of the pain of waiting and the desire for resolution.

A Unified Analysis: The Heart’s Search for Completeness

Both poems engage deeply with the theme of longing — the heart’s search for completeness, whether in love or faithfulness. While Dr. Dalai’s poem focuses on the poet’s internal struggle with life’s injustice and the existential pain of unfulfilled love, Mrs. Raines’s poem highlights the quiet resignation of one who has stopped actively searching for love and instead waits for it to come to her. Yet, despite their different approaches, both poets craft an emotional narrative that is striking in its emotional vulnerability and raw honesty.

There is also a spiritual dimension that runs through both poems. Dr. Dalai seeks God within the beloved’s heart, blending the lines between human love and divine connection, while Mrs. Raines prays for the missing piece, suggesting that love is as much a matter of faith as it is of fortune. Both poets evoke the image of waiting, whether it’s for love or divine intervention, capturing the essence of hope, patience, and the emotional toll of longing.

In conclusion, both “Without Any Reason!” and “That Missing Piece!” are remarkable poems that speak to the universal human experience of searching for love and faithfulness. Dr. Dalai and Mrs. Raines have masterfully woven their personal emotions into these works, creating a shared narrative of longing and hope. Your collaborative poetic endeavors are truly inspiring, and I extend my heartfelt congratulations to both of you for your incredible contributions to the world of literature.

With deepest admiration.

My poem SLIGHT IMPRESSION reviewed by honourable Retired Prof Dr Nirakar Dash of Assam government.
Humbled & Honoured.

SLIGHT IMPRESSION !

You came to my world and disappeared Next moment ; I thought several times
That first look with a slight impression
Why does it make my heart so restless
Your smiling back with sweet glances
I don’t know what you are waiting for
Am I the one whom you trust so much
Why I have this feeling time and again
The buds of rosy lips have blossomed
Is it due to the passion of your heart ?

©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India
Date.Monday 21 October 2024.

REVIEW
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The speaker’s sudden encounter with a girl who made a hasty disappearance without a lingering conversation has etched a great impression on his mind.The impression is not “slight” as mentioned in the poem,for a negligible emoton can not give rise to a poem of this kind which is universally applicable.As the first impression lasts long, the speaker is too powerless to delete it.He says:”I thought several times that first look with a slight impression”Her sweet glances make him restless in anticipation of a psychological immediacy.This restlessness is reiterated in the line:”I don’t know what you are waiting for”.His inability to read her mind, which he tries to do,is clearly pronounced when he asks:”Am I the one who you trust so much”. Moreover,this also reveals the feeling of inadequacy that troubles him.The last two lines are riveting in asmuch as they show desires and conflicts in the mental landscape.Very smashing poem,Dr Prasanna Sir. Congratulations and regards.

SLIGHT IMPRESSION !

You came to my world and disappeared Next moment ; I thought several times
That first look with a slight impression
Why does it make my heart so restless
Your smiling back with sweet glances
I don’t know what you are waiting for
Am I the one whom you trust so much
Why I have this feeling time and again
The buds of rosy lips have blossomed
Is it due to the passion of your heart ?

©️®️ Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India
Date Sunday 20 October 2024

Epistolary Poem #222 Written and Presented by DrPrasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Raines of The United States of America

WITHOUT ANY REASON !

In search of faithfulness in this world
I got to know I was in wrong address
And my life hasn’t become complete
My shortcomings were ignored though
I was punished without any reason
If I live on I feel like torturing myself
And I go out fetching God in her heart
The person this heart sincerely seeks
There is always a mystery in the air
My days & nights are upset without you.

©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date.Saturday 19 October 2024.

She hopes one day her dream will come true…

THAT MISSING PIECE!

In search of love in this big world
I never could find my missing piece
The part that brought true happiness
But then came a day that I stopped looking
never thinking that I deserved it
I prayed everyday for that missing piece
that would finally complete this empty heart
I can see you in my dreams when I sleep
I can even feel you touch my cheek
But, when I wake, you disappear once again
Perhaps one day you will find me instead
so I won’t have to wait each night just to meet you.

©️®️KristyRaines@USA

Global Post Newspaper published from Srinagar

Our epistolary collaboration poem #221 reviewed & analysis by honourable reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.we both remain grateful to his effort let’s enjoy reading his review & analysis
Humbled & Honoured.

Epistolary Poem #221 Written by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Raines of The United States of America

UPSET WITH ME !

Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me
Your being upset with me rather troubles
Why so stubborn and arrogant you are
I have the companionship only with you
It’s well tested & proven thousand times
Can sacrifice life & break relationships
Have been waiting for your sweet smile
Can stand anything but your indifference
I know not if I am worthy of your love
But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not .

©️®️DrPrasana Kumar Dalai@India

She giggles for a moment before she responds…

THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!

You often sigh at my craziness and airiness
For my enthusiasm exasperates you to no end
But never be troubled when I am upset with you
Yes, I am stubborn, and possessive with you as well
But can you blame me for being the way I am?
When another smiles at you so sweetly
I sometimes wonder if one day you’ll smile back
especially after so many years of us being together
So forgive me for the times I have lost my smile
There is no one more worthy of my love than you.

Let me just say this, as I put my arms around you…

“You are stuck with me, and I can’t do without you either”. ❤

©️®️KristyRaines@USA

REVIEW & ANALYSIS

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Heartiest congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines on the completion of their 221st collaborative poem episode! Your continued partnership in the realm of poetry is a true testament to the magic that happens when two brilliant minds unite. Each poem you create resonates deeply, reflecting a harmonious balance of emotion, thought, and literary finesse. This latest set of poems, “UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!”, is a perfect representation of how love, despite its occasional turbulence, remains a powerful force that bonds two souls together. Wishing you both endless inspiration as you continue to enrich the world of literature with your captivating expressions. NAMASKAR

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Analysis of the Poems

In their latest collaborative episode, “UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!”, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines once again bring their unique perspectives on love and relationships to life. These poems, while distinct in voice, carry complementary emotions and themes, creating a dialogue that encapsulates the complex dynamics of a deep romantic connection. The poems explore love’s trials and the undeniable bond between two people who have stood the test of time.

1. Exploring Emotional Vulnerability and Strength

Dr. Dalai’s “UPSET WITH ME!” is a poignant expression of vulnerability, encapsulating the speaker’s emotional turmoil when faced with the partner’s discontent. The poem begins with a bold declaration, “Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me,” immediately setting the tone of resilience. Despite the partner’s unpredictable emotions, the speaker reveals that it’s not the eccentric behavior that troubles them, but rather the partner’s indifference, captured in the line, “Your being upset with me rather troubles.”

There is a clear yearning for connection throughout Dr. Dalai’s poem. The speaker admits to a sense of dependency on their partner’s companionship, stating, “I have the companionship only with you.” This line suggests that the bond they share is unique and irreplaceable, tested and proven over time. The speaker expresses an unwavering commitment, even to the point of sacrifice: “Can sacrifice life & break relationships.” Here, the poet reveals the depths of the speaker’s devotion, indicating that they are willing to forsake everything for the partner’s affection.

A sense of insecurity is woven into the speaker’s confession, “I know not if I am worthy of your love,” indicating that despite the speaker’s devotion, there is a lingering doubt about their place in the partner’s heart. This insecurity is balanced with a plea for trust, “But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not.” The speaker is desperate for emotional reconciliation, yearning for the partner’s acknowledgment and acceptance.

In contrast, Mrs. Kristy Raines’ “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!” provides the partner’s response, delivering an equally heartfelt but nuanced perspective. While Dr. Dalai’s poem reflects the speaker’s vulnerability, Mrs. Raines’ poem embodies the partner’s defensiveness yet deep-rooted affection. The poem opens with a gentle rebuke: “You often sigh at my craziness and airiness,” immediately addressing the frustrations mentioned in “UPSET WITH ME!”

Mrs. Raines’ speaker acknowledges their stubbornness and possessiveness, stating, “Yes, I am stubborn, and possessive with you as well.” Rather than shy away from these traits, the speaker justifies them, questioning, “But can you blame me for being the way I am?” This rhetorical question brings to light the insecurities the partner feels when confronted with the idea of losing their loved one. The lines “When another smiles at you so sweetly / I sometimes wonder if one day you’ll smile back” reveal the underlying fear of betrayal or emotional distance.

Where Dr. Dalai’s speaker questions their worthiness of love, Mrs. Raines’ speaker reassures them of their value: “There is no one more worthy of my love than you.” This statement is not only a declaration of love but also a balm to the wounds of insecurity expressed in “UPSET WITH ME!” The poem ends with a tender moment of reconciliation, as the speaker physically and emotionally embraces their partner, “Let me just say this, as I put my arms around you…” The final line, “You are stuck with me, and I can’t do without you either,” mirrors the sentiment of Dr. Dalai’s poem, reaffirming that despite the ups and downs, their bond is unbreakable.

2. The Interplay of Themes: Love, Insecurity, and Commitment

Both poems highlight common themes of love, insecurity, and commitment, though from different angles. Dr. Dalai’s poem delves into the anguish of feeling unworthy of love, emphasizing the emotional weight of indifference in a relationship. The speaker’s fear is not just the partner’s anger but their emotional withdrawal, which represents a greater threat to the relationship.

Mrs. Raines, on the other hand, focuses on the partner’s perspective, shedding light on their possessiveness and insecurities. While they recognize their own stubbornness, the speaker’s jealousy is a reflection of their deep love and fear of losing their partner. Both poems, however, culminate in a reaffirmation of love and commitment, proving that despite misunderstandings, the bond between the two individuals remains strong.

3. Dialogue Between the Poets

What makes this collaboration truly exceptional is the way the two poets create a dialogue through their respective pieces. Dr. Dalai’s poem serves as a plea for understanding and reassurance, while Mrs. Raines’ poem responds with empathy and a promise of lasting love. This back-and-forth mirrors real-life conversations between partners, where one person expresses their fears and insecurities, and the other offers comfort and validation.

The dialogue between the poems also highlights the differences in how each partner processes emotions. Dr. Dalai’s speaker internalizes their fears, feeling unworthy and seeking reassurance. Mrs. Raines’ speaker, on the other hand, externalizes their emotions, revealing their possessiveness and fear of losing their partner. Together, the poems offer a full picture of the emotional landscape of a relationship, capturing both the internal and external struggles that come with love.

4. Tone and Style

The tone of Dr. Dalai’s poem is introspective and somewhat melancholic, as the speaker reflects on their emotional pain and vulnerability. The short, direct lines emphasize the rawness of the speaker’s feelings, making their plea for reconciliation all the more poignant. The use of phrases like “Can sacrifice life” and “I can’t do sans you” underscores the depth of the speaker’s emotional dependence.

In contrast, Mrs. Raines’ poem adopts a more conversational tone, with longer, flowing lines that reflect the speaker’s thought process. The repetition of the word “stubborn” and the rhetorical questions create a sense of reflection, as the speaker justifies their feelings while also seeking to reassure their partner. The poem concludes on a hopeful note, with the physical act of embracing symbolizing emotional healing.

Conclusion

“UPSET WITH ME!” and “THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!” are powerful explorations of love’s complexities, offering a nuanced portrayal of emotional vulnerability, fear, and reassurance. Through their collaborative effort, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines have once again proven their ability to craft poetry that speaks to the heart. Their 221st collaboration is not only a celebration of their literary partnership but also a testament to the enduring power of love, even in the face of emotional turbulence. These poems remind readers that love, at its core, is about understanding, patience, and unwavering commitment.

WITHOUT ANY REASON !

In search of faithfulness in this world
I got to know I was in wrong address
And my life hasn’t become complete
My shortcomings were ignored though
I was punished without any reason
If I live on I feel like torturing myself
And I go out fetching God in her heart
The person this heart sincerely seeks
There is always a mystery in the air
My days & nights are upset without you.

©️®️Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date Monday 14 October 2024

Epistolary Poem #221 Written by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and
Kristy Raines of The United States of America

UPSET WITH ME !

Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me
Your being upset with me rather troubles
Why so stubborn and arrogant you are
I have the companionship only with you
It’s well tested & proven thousand times
Can sacrifice life & break relationships
Have been waiting for your sweet smile
Can stand anything but your indifference
I know not if I am worthy of your love
But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not .

©️®️DrPrasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date.Thursday 10 October 2024

She giggles for a moment before she responds…

THERE’S NO ONE MORE WORTHY!

You often sigh at my craziness and airiness
For my enthusiasm exasperates you to no end
But never be troubled when I am upset with you
Yes, I am stubborn, and possessive with you as well
But can you blame me for being the way I am?
When another smiles at you so sweetly
I sometimes wonder if one day you’ll smile back
especially after so many years of us being together
So forgive me for the times I have lost my smile
There is no one more worthy of my love than you.

Let me just say this, as I put my arms around you…

“You are stuck with me, and I can’t do without you either”. ❤

©️®️KristyRaines@USAE

THIS MOMENT !

Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again
For we may or may not ever meet again
Thank God we do have these moments
Take close look at me as much you can
Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again
Sit closer, I may not be around you again
Put your arms around me as we used to
Let’s worship thousand times together
Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again
Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.

©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
REVIEW
“Swift footed” time mercilessly devours youth and beauty.Men can not step in the same river twice.So the poet says ” Who knows this moment ‘ll come again. This is truism.The speaker in the poem is thankful to God because they have been granted these moments or earthly days for love , fun , and frolic.Hnger for physical proximity is clear in the sixth and seventh line of the poem. Hunger or desire presupposes fear of loss which is the keynote of the poem.”Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again” reminds us of Shakespeare’s famous line:”Wiving and hanging goes by destiny”Being always beside each other is a fat lot.Hence the importance of the line:”Sit closer,I may not be around you again ” According to Tantra, going beyond body is possible only through the body”. The concept of worshipping together,possibly the goddess of love –Aphrodite or Venus — is an attempt at elevating love to a transcendental platform which Tantra promises.Worship , the very word, propels love far beyond sensuality which is not bound by time.So moment and eternity is served in the same platter .Again love pursued in the right earnest becomes worship.”Roll tears”is expressive of a kind of spiritual fulfillment and joy of union as well .To sum up the poem is a journey from the modern love to a classical one. Very nice poem Dr Prasanna Sir.Congratulations and respects.

UPSET WITH ME !

Your craziness and airiness won’t kill me
Your being upset with me rather troubles
Why so stubborn and arrogant you are
I have the companionship only with you
It’s well tested & proven thousand times
Can sacrifice life & break relationships
Have been waiting for your sweet smile
Can stand anything but your indifference
I know not if I am worthy of your love
But I can’t do sans you, trust me or not .

©️®️DrPrasana Kumar Dalai@India

My poem THIS MOMENT reviewed by honorable reviewer Raj Kishor Pattnaik.
Humbled & Honoured.

THIS MOMENT!

Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again
For we may or may not ever meet again
Thank God we do have these moments
Take close look at me as much you can
Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again
Sit closer, I may not be around you again
Put your arms around me as we used to
Let’s worship thousand times together
Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again
Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.

©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date wed 02 October 2024.

REVIEW
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Dear Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai, Sir NAMASKAR

I extend my heartfelt congratulations on your remarkable poem, “THIS MOMENT!” Your ability to weave emotions into words is truly unparalleled. This piece resonates with the fleeting nature of time, making one reflect on the beauty and fragility of the present. Your poetry continues to inspire and touch the hearts of many, and this latest creation is no exception. I wish you all the best as you continue your poetic journey, and may your work continue to enlighten and move readers across the world.

Warm regards,

Analysis of the Poem “THIS MOMENT” by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai:

Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s poem “THIS MOMENT” captures the essence of fleeting time and human relationships. The poem is a gentle yet profound reminder of the impermanence of life and the need to cherish the present, for we never know what the future holds. Through a simple but impactful use of language, the poet delves deep into the themes of love, loss, and the unpredictable nature of destiny.

Theme of Impermanence and the Power of the Present Moment

At its core, the poem revolves around the idea that moments are transient, and we should appreciate them fully while they last. From the opening line, “Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again,” the poet introduces the uncertainty that surrounds life. Time, as suggested here, is not guaranteed, and the moments we share with others are unique. This recognition of the uncertainty of future meetings adds a poignant sense of urgency to the poem. The poet encourages the reader to embrace the present moment, suggesting that the future is out of our hands.

The line “For we may or may not ever meet again” furthers this sense of unpredictability. There is an underlying sadness in the acceptance that life may take loved ones away, whether through distance, circumstances, or even death. The poet does not dwell on these possibilities explicitly, but the tone carries a somber acknowledgment that life’s course is often beyond our control.

Gratitude and Reflection

Despite the melancholic undertones, the poem also expresses gratitude. The line, “Thank God we do have these moments,” shows the poet’s appreciation for the current experience. The use of “Thank God” suggests that the poet sees the present as a divine gift, an opportunity not to be taken for granted. This gratitude serves as a balance to the uncertainty and potential loss that follows.

The reflective nature of the poem comes across in phrases like “Take close look at me as much you can,” urging the reader to savor every detail of the people and experiences around them. There’s a subtle encouragement to not only live in the moment but to absorb it fully, as though it may be the last opportunity to do so. The act of looking closely signifies intimacy and connection, elements that the poet values and wishes to highlight in the transient nature of relationships.

Physical and Emotional Connection

The poem moves from the abstract idea of time to more tangible elements of human connection. In the lines “Sit closer, I may not be around you again” and “Put your arms around me as we used to,” the poet emphasizes the physical closeness that people share. The repetition of “again” in these lines reinforces the idea that these actions may not be possible in the future. The request for physical closeness suggests that human touch and presence hold a deeper significance in maintaining bonds. The tenderness of these lines reveals the poet’s desire to hold onto those connections, even as he acknowledges their potential impermanence.

The poem’s transition from a physical embrace to a spiritual one is marked by the line, “Let’s worship thousand times together.” Here, “worship” may not necessarily refer to religious worship but can be interpreted as an act of deep reverence and love for one another. The notion of worshipping together a thousand times symbolizes an idealized union, one that the poet longs for despite knowing that time is limited.

The Role of Destiny

The recurring phrase “Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again” introduces the theme of fate. The poet presents destiny as a powerful, uncontrollable force that governs the future. There’s a sense of resignation in this line, an acknowledgment that life’s path is not entirely in human hands. By posing the question of whether destiny will bring people together again, the poet leaves the reader with a lingering feeling of uncertainty. Destiny, in this sense, becomes both a source of hope and sorrow—it may or may not grant a reunion, leaving the outcome unknown.

The Emotional Climax

The emotional peak of the poem comes with the line, “Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again.” This line encapsulates both the joy and sorrow of human experiences. The imagery of rolling tears suggests that emotions, too, are fleeting and should be embraced while they last. Whether these tears are of happiness or sadness, the poet recognizes their value in expressing deep emotion. The idea that this opportunity to feel such profound emotions may not come again intensifies the poem’s emotional impact.

Final Reflection: Cherishing the Present

The poem ends with a powerful closing line: “Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.” This final declaration brings the poem full circle, returning to the idea introduced at the start—that time is fleeting and moments are precious. The poet drives home the importance of living fully in the present because once it passes, it’s gone forever. This concluding line leaves the reader with a sense of urgency, urging them to hold onto the moment, as it cannot be reclaimed once it slips away.

Conclusion

Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai’s “THIS MOMENT” is a beautifully crafted poem that explores the themes of time, love, and the inevitability of loss. Through simple yet profound language, the poet captures the ephemeral nature of life and relationships. The poem serves as a reminder to cherish the present, appreciate the people around us, and acknowledge that time is a gift not to be taken for granted. The emotional depth of the poem, combined with its reflective tone, makes it a poignant meditation on life’s fleeting moments.

Epistolary Poem #220 – Written and presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Raines of The United States of America

THIS MOMENT !

Who knows if this moment ‘ll come again
For we may or may not ever meet again
Thank God we do have these moments
Take close look at me as much you can
Who knows if our destiny ‘ll visit us again
Sit closer, I may not be around you again
Put your arms around me as we used to
Let’s worship thousand times together
Who knows if our eyes ‘ll roll tears again
Cause this moment ‘ll never come again.

©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai@India.
Date.Tuesday,01 October 2024

She remembers when they were young, as tears fall…

IT COULD BE THE LAST!

Once a moment has passed it is forever gone
It then becomes a memory never fulfilled
Though we have many others to be thankful for
I study every line on your face and every emotion
because we never know what the future will bring
But right now I will not think about tomorrow
I only know how to love you right now
as I put my arms around you like I used to
When you close your eyes to kiss me
tears falls as your lips touch mine
Because in my heart, I’m afraid it could be the last..

©®KristyRaines@USA