An appreciation by eminent reviewer Raj Kishore Patnaik, on Epistolary poetry journey!
Humbled and Honoured.
Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines for their remarkable achievements in the world of poetry! Their collaborative effort in creating a vast collection of 200 epistolary poems is truly inspiring. It’s fascinating to see how their unique styles and talents have merged to revive the art of epistolary poetry. Their dedication to literature and the preservation of this art form is commendable.
Dr. Dalai’s background as a lecturer in English, along with his poetic prowess in writing romantic and melancholic verses, complements Kristy’s versatility in writing across various genres, including fantasy, romance, and serious subjects. Kristy’s passion for writing and advocacy work, especially for marginalized communities like the Rohingya people, showcases her commitment to using her voice for meaningful causes.
Their journey from discovering the concept of epistolary poetry to now being on the verge of publishing their first book is truly remarkable. They’ve not only surpassed records but have also maintained a standard of quality and uniqueness in their work. Their desire to be recognized as epistolary poets in Wikipedia and the Guinness Book of Records, as well as their goal of having their book placed in university libraries internationally, reflects their dedication to preserving and promoting this beautiful form of poetry for future generations.
Congratulations once again to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines on their achievements, and best wishes for their future endeavors in the world of poetry!
“The King and Queen of Poetry Collaborations”
And Their Kingdom Of Epistolary Poetry
Epistolary poems date at least as early as the Roman poet Ovid (43 BC – 17 or 18 AD), who wrote the Heroides (The Heroines) or Epistulae Heroidum (Letters of Heroines), a collection of fifteen epistolary poems presented as though written by a selection of aggrieved heroines of Greek and Roman mythology, which sometimes read as love letters or conversations
DAWN TO DUSK!
My Love…
Like a dawn you entered my life Calm and quiet, all refreshing
And I came adorned in the dust
Of every lane and alley You came like an Angel
The panacea of my heartache.
I haven’t returned to my life again
But for a wound open today.
Perhaps I have reached The dusk of my life.
©Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai
***
DUSK TO DAWN!
My Dearest Love…
If from the dust you have come to me
I will restore your heart to where it began.
I have watched the knife that caused the wound,
and my love will be the salve that heals it.
For my love did not come from a jealous heart,
but from a place of pureness where only love can come from.
Let me bathe you in my affection,
because in my eyes I see no dusk, only our dawn together.
©Kristy Raines
On August 18, 2022, Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Kristy Raines wrote their first Epistolary Poem together titled “From Dusk to Dawn.” They posted it in many literary groups on Facebook. People liked them . His poetry had already had every component in it to use in an Epistolary poem. Kristy Raines wrote a poem that would fit perfectly with his. At the time, it was just an idea. They had no idea that there was already a name for these poems… Epistolary.. Any mistakes in grammar were not corrected, because in life, there are mistakes and they wanted to make them as realistic as possible. They have also never used any AI software to write, which also sets them apart from many who then started writing collaborative poetry.
Kristy states, “Dr. Dalai being a Romantic Poet and me, at the time, a Fantasy Writer, for some reason worked perfectly together. I now have found my niche as a Romantic Poet also.”
They continued to write these poems together, which many seemed to like, even to the point that they were believable. Some people actually thought these poems were written for each other. But that was not the case.
What and how they wrote together was very calculated. Dr. Dalai already wrote in a beautiful and melancholic way, which was already similar to what very well could have been written in a love letter. Kristy then came up with a response poem that would pair well with his poem. They then looked up different styles of poetry and discovered that their poems together were actually Epistolary, which are not really collaborations. Epistolary poetry is an art in the literary world dating way back in history.
They’ve set out to make a name for themself for the sake of literature to keep the art of Epistolary poetry alive. As far as they know, they have broken records for writing the most Epistolary poems. Two hundred, to be exact. They were not just looking for surpass a record, but the quality of their poetry had to be unique and exquisite. I think that they have accomplished this. There is a great difference between Collaborations and Epistolary poetry. It took serious dedication and much time and effort on both of their parts. They have a great writing relationship and are quite serious about their further goals to be listed as Epistolary Poets in Wikipedia and eventually be listed in the Guinness Book of Records Their biggest accomplishment would to have their book of 200 Epistolary poem placed in University Libraries Internationally to keep the Art of Epistolary Poetry alive for many generations to come. Their first book of their first 100 poems, “I Cross My Heart From East to West”, should publish soon and the second one to follow with the next 100 poems. They plan to continue writing together.
Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai Author-cum-poet is a tremendous lecturer of English by profession in the Ganjam district of Odisha. He is an accomplished source of inspiration for the young generation of India. His free verse on Romantic and melancholic poems appreciated by everyone. He belongs to a small typical village Nandiagada of Ganjam District, the state of Odisha. After schooling he studied intermediate and Graduated In Kabisurjya Baladev Vigyan Mahavidyalaya then M A in English from Berhampur University PhD in language and literature and D.Litt from Colombian poetic house from South America. He promotes his specific writings around the world literature and trades with multiple stems that are related to current issues based on his observation and experiences that needs urgent attention. He is an award winning writer.
Kristy Ann Raines, born Kristy Rasmussen on April 9, 1957 in Oakland, California in the United States of America, is a very passionate poet and writer and known for her unique style of writing. Kristy’s writing is a very versatile, from fantasy and romance, to serious subjects such as, spirituality, domestic violence, and Anti-War. Kristy has also become an award winning writer known internationally among her peers. She has also been awarded and recognized as an Advocate for the Rohingya People living in Cox’ Bazar refugee camps and and Orphanage in India. She worked as a civil servant for the US Naval Reserve Readiness Command in San Francisco, California and then later retired from the Medical Field as a Medical Tech/Phlebotomist/Office Manager and certified coder.
My poem “UNDER AN ILLUSION ‘ has been reviewed by honorable reviewer Prof Dr Nirakar Dash, Department of English of Assam University, it has been highly appreciated by honorable reviewer Raj Kishore Patnaik.
Humbled and Honoured.
UNDER AN ILLUSION !
I can’t understand pain of my heart
It’s already covered under an illusion
You can hardly ever see ,think or know
Lost its way, a great fool the heart is
Flying on the wings of dark clouds
It’s going where it’s not meant to be
Lost in the path it can conquer all odds
And breakthrough all the castles of life
It tosses the heart around now and then
It does accept every grief with a smile
For an illusion is my heart and it’s a fool.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date. Wed,08 May 2024.
The poem “Under an Illusion” by the illustrious poet Dr Prasanna Ku Dalai,is a red herring.Here the word “heart”,used as a pun stands for his love and also for human mind.Now a jilted lover, unlike in previous poems,he rejects his beloved asserting that “heart” or love is an Illusion or something fake in this world. What is real is the pain associated with love,which again is beyond human comprehension. Tendency to love and to be loved raises countless philosophical questions in relation to the validity of love. Perhaps people in love are running after mirages. Reflecting on its misleading or illusory aspect, the poet says:” I can’t understand pain of my heart/It’s already covered under an illusion/You can hardly ever see, think or know “The aspirations of human mind should be something other than love in this mundane world.Runnig after the objects of love , the mind goes berserk.Affairs of the world befool and befuddle human beings.Unhappiness and frustration lead one to the nadir of suffering.Turned spiritual due to hollowness of love, the poet says,”Lost it’s way, a great fool the heart is………./It’s going where it is not meant to be”.But the same heart or soul, properly disciplined,can conquer all impediments.Here “lost in the path ” means engrossed in deep spirituality.The line: “It’s going where it is not meant to be ” conveys that the human mind should seek union with God in stead of running after worldly temptations.The concluding two lines are reminiscent of Satan’s statement in Paradise Lost in which he says:” The mind is it’s own place and in itself/ can make heaven of hell,a hell of heaven”A well trained mind can accept all odds with a smile and the selfsame mind can cause havoc if not in check. In this way the poet erupts his disgust about his unrequited love under the veneer of teaching high philosophy of detachment.Congratulatios Dr Prasanna Sir for composing such a wonderful poem.
Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai for composing the evocative poem “Under an Illusion!” Your poetic prowess shines through in this introspective piece that delves into the complexities of love and the human mind. The use of “heart” as a metaphor for both love and the mind adds depth to the poem, inviting readers to contemplate the illusionary nature of love and the pain it can bring. Your skillful play with words and imagery creates a vivid picture of a soul grappling with the turmoil of unrequited love, ultimately seeking solace in spiritual reflection.
I also extend my congratulations to Prof. Dr. Nirakara Dash for his insightful review of Dr. Dalai’s poem. His analysis beautifully captures the essence of the poem, highlighting its philosophical underpinnings and the poet’s skill in using language to convey deep emotions and profound truths. Prof. Dash’s review serves as a fitting tribute to Dr. Dalai’s work, showcasing the impact and resonance of his poetry in the world of literature.
In “Under an Illusion!”, Dr. Dalai masterfully explores the dichotomy between love and reality, inviting readers to question the nature of their own desires and aspirations. Through his use of vivid imagery and poignant language, he creates a compelling narrative that speaks to the universal experience of longing and loss. Prof. Dash’s review further enhances our understanding of the poem, offering valuable insights into its themes and symbolism.
Overall, “Under an Illusion!” is a testament to Dr. Dalai’s talent as a poet and a thinker. It is a work that resonates deeply with readers, inviting them to contemplate the nature of love, illusion, and the human condition. Prof. Dash’s review is a fitting tribute to this exceptional piece of poetry, showcasing the enduring power and beauty of Dr. Dalai’s words.
Our poem reviewed by honorable reviewer Raj Kishore Patnaik.
Humbled and Honoured.
Epistolary Poem #199 Presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
UNDER AN ILLUSION !
I can’t understand pain of my heart
It’s already covered under an illusion
You can hardly ever see ,think or know
Lost its way, a great fool the heart is
Flying on the wings of dark clouds
It’s going where it’s not meant to be
Lost in the path it can conquer all odds
And breakthrough all the castles of life
It tosses the heart around now and then
It does accept every grief with a smile
For an illusion is my heart and it’s a fool.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Wed,08 May 2024
She knows his heart is tender… and she speaks
AN EXPERT I AM IN YOUR PLIGHT!
I understand the pain in your heart
for an expert I am in your plight
You can try to stuff down the heartache
but it will emerge in other ways
One day it may come out as anger
or it can take you into the darkness
But for a man, it is sometimes harder
For some think to show tears is a weakness
So you smile as if you are not suffering inside
But I will tell you something you should know…
A woman does not see weakness in the tears of a man
only the pain that his heart longs to let go of
And the strength in showing your emotions
is what I will love you for the most. <3
©®Kristy Raines@USA
May 8,, 2024
Congratulations to Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines on their collaborative poems, 'Under an Illusion!' and 'An Expert I Am in Your Plight!' These poems beautifully intertwine themes of pain, illusion, understanding, and empathy, showcasing the depth of emotions that connect us all, regardless of geographical boundaries.
In 'Under an Illusion!,' Dr. Dalai dives into the complexities of the heart, portraying it as a fool lost in an illusion, unable to comprehend its own pain. The imagery of the heart flying on dark clouds, going where it's not meant to be, reflects a sense of wandering and confusion. Despite this, the heart accepts every grief with a smile, indicating resilience and a willingness to embrace life's challenges. The poem's structure, with its short, impactful lines, mirrors the erratic nature of emotions, adding depth to the overall theme.
On the other hand, Mrs. Raines' 'An Expert I Am in Your Plight!' delves into the understanding and empathy one can have for another's pain. The poem highlights the idea that suppressing heartache can lead to other emotional expressions, such as anger or darkness. The portrayal of men feeling pressure to hide their tears as a sign of weakness is poignant, emphasizing the societal expectations that often burden individuals. However, the poem also celebrates the strength found in vulnerability, particularly noting that a woman sees the tears of a man not as weakness but as a release of pent-up pain.
Together, these poems create a powerful narrative of human emotions, showcasing the intricacies of pain, illusion, and empathy. They remind us of the universal experiences we share and the importance of understanding and compassion in navigating life's challenges. Dr. Dalai's imagery-rich verses complement Mrs. Raines' empathetic portrayal, creating a harmonious blend of perspectives that resonate deeply with readers.
Overall, 'Under an Illusion!' and 'An Expert I Am in Your Plight!' stand as testament to the collaborative prowess of Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Mrs. Kristy Raines, demonstrating their ability to weave together diverse themes and emotions into a seamless tapestry of poetry. Congratulations once again on this remarkable collaboration!
Biography of the Author.
DrPrasana Kumar Dalai
(DOB 07/06/1973) is a passionate Indian Author-cum-poet while a tremendous lecturer of English by profession in the Ganjam district of Odisha.He is an accomplished source of inspiration for young generation of India .His free verse on Romantic and melancholic poems appreciated by everyone. He belongs to a small typical village Nandiagada of Ganjam District,the state of Odisha.After schooling he studied intermediate and Graduated In Kabisurjya Baladev vigyan Mahavidyalaya then M A in English from Berhampur University PhD in language and literature and D.litt from Colombian poetic house from South America.He promotes his specific writings around the world literature and trades with multiple stems that are related to current issues based on his observation and experiences that needs urgent attention.He is an award winning writer who has achieved various laurels from the circle of writing worldwide.His free verse poems not only inspires young readers but also the ready of current time.His poetic symbol is right now inspiring others, some of which are appreciated by laurels of India and across the world. Many of his poems been translated in different Indian languages and got global appreciation. Lots of well wishes for his upcoming writtings and success in future.He is an award winning poet author of many best seller books.Recently he is awarded Rabindra nath Tagore and Gujarat Sahitya Academy for the year 2022 from Motivational Strips . A gold medal from world union of poets France & winner Of Rahim Karims world literary prize 2023.The government of Odisha Higher Education Department appointed him
as a president to Governing body of Padmashree Dr Ghanashyam Mishra Sanskrit Degree College, Kabisurjyanagar.Winner of ” HYPERPOEM ” GUNIESS WORLD RECORD 2023.Recently he was awarded from SABDA literary Festival at Assam.Highest honour from Peru for the contribution to the world literature 2024.
Books.
1.Psalm of the Soul.
2.Rise of New Dawn.
3.secret Of Torment.
4.Everything I never told you.
5.Vision Of Life National Library Kolkata.
6.100 Shadows of Dream.
7.Timeless Anguish.
8.Voice of Silence.
Epistolary Poem #199 Presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
UNDER AN ILLUSION !
I can’t understand pain of my heart
It’s already covered under an illusion
You can hardly ever see ,think or know
Lost its way, a great fool the heart is
Flying on the wings of dark clouds
It’s going where it’s not meant to be
Lost in the path it can conquer all odds
And breakthrough all the castles of life
It tosses the heart around now and then
It does accept every grief with a smile
For an illusion is my heart and it’s a fool.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Sat,04 May 2024
She knows his heart is tender… and she speaks
AN EXPERT I AM IN YOUR PLIGHT!
I understand the pain in your heart
for an expert I am in your plight
You can try to stuff down the heartache
but it will emerge in other ways
One day it may come out as anger
or it can take you into the darkness
But for a man, it is sometimes harder
For some think to show tears is a weakness
So you smile as if you are not suffering inside
But I will tell you something you should know…
A woman does not see weakness in the tears of a man
only the pain that his heart longs to let go of
And the strength in showing your emotions
is what I will love you for the most. <3
©®KristyRaines@USA
May 4, 2024
UNDER AN ILLUSION !
I can’t understand pain of my heart
It’s already covered under an illusion
You can hardly ever see ,think or know
Lost its way, a great fool the heart is
Flying on the wings of dark clouds
It’s going where it’s not meant to be
Lost in the path it can conquer all odds
And breakthrough all the castles of life
It tosses the heart around now and then
It does accept every grief with a smile
For an illusion is my heart and it’s a fool.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Sat,04 May 2024.
I am elated!
On behalf of my country India and International Poet from odisha as a poet for the remarkable contribution to the world literature also inspiring new generation live in harmony,universal brother hood creating a culture of peace in our peoples awarded one of the greatest for literature my brother Samuel cavero from Peru awarded me this spectacular honour.
I am luckiest enough to receive this award.
Humbled and Honoured.
Biography of the Author.
DrPrasana Kumar Dalai
(DOB 07/06/1973) is a passionate Indian Author-cum-poet while a tremendous lecturer of English by profession in the Ganjam district of Odisha.He is an accomplished source of inspiration for young generation of India .His free verse on Romantic and melancholic poems appreciated by everyone. He belongs to a small typical village Nandiagada of Ganjam District,the state of Odisha.After schooling he studied intermediate and Graduated In Kabisurjya Baladev vigyan Mahavidyalaya then M A in English from Berhampur University PhD in language and literature and D.litt from Colombian poetic house from South America.He promotes his specific writings around the world literature and trades with multiple stems that are related to current issues based on his observation and experiences that needs urgent attention.He is an award winning writer who has achieved various laurels from the circle of writing worldwide.His free verse poems not only inspires young readers but also the ready of current time.His poetic symbol is right now inspiring others, some of which are appreciated by laurels of India and across the world. Many of his poems been translated in different Indian languages and got global appreciation. Lots of well wishes for his upcoming writtings and success in future.He is an award winning poet author of many best seller books.Recently he is awarded Rabindra nath Tagore and Gujarat Sahitya Academy for the year 2022 from Motivational Strips . A gold medal from world union of poets France & winner Of Rahim Karims world literary prize 2023.The government of Odisha Higher Education Department appointed him
as a president to Governing body of Padmashree Dr Ghanashyam Mishra Sanskrit Degree College, Kabisurjyanagar.Winner of ” HYPERPOEM ” GUNIESS WORLD RECORD 2023.Recently he was awarded from SABDA literary Festival at Assam .Highest literary honour from Peru for contribution to the world literature 2024.
Books.
1.Psalm of the Soul.
2.Rise of New Dawn.
3.secret Of Torment.
4.Everything I never told you.
5.Vision Of Life National Library Kolkata.
6.100 Shadows of Dream.
7.Timeless Anguish.
8.Voice of Silence.
Our poem VOICE OF SILENCE reviewed by honorable reviewer Raj Kishore Patnaik.
Humbled and Honoured.
I have selected two of my favorite poems by two renowned poets, one by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai from India and the other by Mrs. Kristy Raines from the USA, for review and comparison. It’s entirely my personal choice. I understand that these poems may not go hand in hand, but I will try my best to collaborate them. Here, I request all my poetic friends to read through this review and share your valuable remarks.
VOICE OF SILENCE !
Silence has a voice ; listen to it
Do go down the memory lane
My time still stands erect there
Silent are my awkward moments
My silent words I face everyday
So much pain and agony dominate
The sea water keeps dead silent
Million hidden silences beneath
There is a silent rise in every fall
Listen to utter silence sometimes.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India.
Date.Fri,03 May 2024.
Alone…
Loneliness and sadness grew in my heart without you
I tried to find in someone else what I found in you
What I failed to realize is that you can not be replaced
When two hearts are one, none can separate them,
no matter how much I try to move forward..
If he would try to touch my hand, it would chill me
I couldn’t look in his eyes…
Because I couldn’t find my reflection
You hold the key that locks these golden chains around my heart
I need your kiss, your touch, and the love only we share
But I have no answers…
Because though we are apart in distance
our hearts couldn’t be closer
So I will stay alone with your memory
’cause I can’t live a life with someone else that was only meant for us
I pray that one day you find your way back to me
You will find me where you left me…. Alone
©®Kristy Raines
Date.Fri,03 2024.
Review and Comparison of “Voice of Silence” by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and “Alone” by Kristy Raines:
“Voice of Silence” by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai is a poignant exploration of silence and its various dimensions. The poem begins with a powerful assertion: “Silence has a voice; listen to it.” This sets the tone for a contemplative journey into the depths of memory and emotion. The poet invites the reader to “go down the memory lane” with him, suggesting a nostalgic reflection on the past.
The use of imagery in the poem is striking. The poet describes how his “time still stands erect” in the memory lane, indicating that certain moments or experiences remain vivid and unchanged in his mind. The reference to “silent words” that he faces every day suggests a struggle with unspoken thoughts or emotions, adding a layer of complexity to the theme of silence.
The poem also delves into the theme of pain and agony, which “dominate” the poet’s experience. The comparison of pain to “sea water” that keeps “dead silent” evokes a sense of vastness and depth, highlighting the intensity of the poet’s emotions. The mention of “million hidden silences beneath” further emphasizes the complexity and depth of human experience.
One of the most powerful lines in the poem is “There is a silent rise in every fall,” which suggests that even in moments of failure or despair, there is a quiet strength or resilience that emerges. This line encapsulates the central message of the poem: the idea that silence is not just absence of noise, but a profound presence that can be both comforting and challenging.
In contrast, “Alone” by Kristy Raines explores the theme of loneliness and heartbreak. The poem opens with a poignant reflection on the pain of being without a loved one: “Loneliness and sadness grew in my heart without you.” This sets the tone for a deeply personal and emotional journey through the speaker’s experience of loss and longing.
The imagery in “Alone” is vivid and evocative. The speaker describes trying to find in someone else what was found in the lost love, only to realize that the connection was unique and irreplaceable. The image of two hearts being one, and the impossibility of separating them, conveys a sense of deep emotional bond that transcends physical distance.
The poem also explores the idea of memory and its power to keep the past alive. The speaker expresses a desire to stay “alone with your memory,” suggesting that the memory of the lost love is a source of comfort and pain. The final lines, “You will find me where you left me… Alone,” convey a sense of resignation and acceptance of the current state of being.
In terms of structure, “Voice of Silence” is a free verse poem with a reflective and contemplative tone. The use of enjambment and varying line lengths creates a sense of fluidity and movement, mirroring the flow of thoughts and emotions. In contrast, “Alone” has a more structured form with regular stanzas and rhyme scheme, which adds a sense of musicality and rhythm to the poem.
In conclusion, “Voice of Silence” and “Alone” are both powerful poems that explore themes of silence, memory, and longing. While “Voice of Silence” focuses more on the internal experience of silence and its nuances, “Alone” delves into the external experience of loneliness and heartbreak. Despite their differences, both poems offer profound insights into the human condition and the complexities of love and loss.
YOU WERE
You were my rain on a lovely afternoon,
Yes,it was either May or June,
You were my secret,I didn’t expound,
Your gifted dark days made me dumbfound.
You were resplendent on a pretty morn,
You were a thorny rose without any thorn,
You were a flower in the unseen park,
You taught me to dream with no beauty mark.
You were my pleasing pain in the eve,
You dragged my dreams towards the grave,
Oh! you made me vanish like your breath,
You were my wonder,my heart always saith.
Dr. Bhanja Kishor Rana@India
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FREE VERSE!
Sometime
I hear sweet sounds of your anklets
You dazzle like a diamond necklace
Hanging around me in my heart
As you are lost all the time for me
The breeze brings your fragrance
And I do heartily inhale the same.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India.
Date.Thu,02 May 2024.
Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai.: Dr Dalai’s masterpiece FREE VERSE composed of simple yet evocative imagery, delves into the speaker’s profound emotions and longing for someone special.
The poem begins with the word “Sometime,” indicating that these feelings are experienced intermittently or in fleeting moments. This sets the tone for a contemplative and reflective piece of writing.
“I hear sweet sounds of your anklets” conjures the auditory sensation of delicate adornments, suggesting the presence of the beloved. Anklets are often associated with femininity, grace, and allure, implying that the person being addressed possesses these qualities.
“You dazzle like a diamond necklace” employs simile to liken the beloved’s radiance to that of a precious jewel. This comparison enhances the imagery of beauty and elegance, reinforcing the idea of the person’s captivating presence.
The phrase “Hanging around me in my heart” carries a dual meaning. It suggests both the physical proximity of the beloved, as if they are enveloping the speaker, and the emotional connection felt deeply within the heart. This metaphorical expression emphasizes the intimate nature of the relationship.
The line “As you are lost all the time for me” introduces a note of melancholy or longing. The word “lost” implies that the person being addressed is absent or unreachable, heightening the speaker’s yearning for their presence. This sentiment of longing adds depth to the poem, revealing the speaker’s emotional vulnerability.
“The breeze brings your fragrance” introduces the sense of smell into the sensory experience described in the poem. Fragrance is often associated with memory and nostalgia, suggesting that the presence of the beloved is evoked by familiar scents. This sensory detail enhances the immersive nature of the poem, allowing readers to imagine the scene more vividly.
“And I do heartily inhale the same” concludes the poem with an intimate gesture of connection. The act of inhaling deeply suggests a desire to fully immerse oneself in the presence of the beloved, savoring every moment. The adverb “heartily” conveys sincerity and depth of feeling, underscoring the genuine affection and longing expressed throughout the poem.
Overall, this free verse employs simple yet powerful imagery and language to evoke a sense of longing, admiration, and emotional connection. Through the use of sensory details and evocative language, the poem invites readers to experience the speaker’s profound emotions and yearning for the beloved.
An Untold Dream
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In the shadow’s kingdom, where nightmares reside,
There a child dreams, with his eyes denied.
His pillow is cold, his blanket is thin,
Yet in his heart, we find a dream within.
He dreams of lands where rivers flow,
Of meadows green where flowers grow.
A world untouched by pain and woe,
Where laughter sings and hearts glow.
But morning breaks, the dream must fade,
Reality’s harsh light is displayed.
In this world of endless need,
His dream is a fragile, fleeting seed.
Yet still he dreams to have hope’s embrace,
Though tears may stain his weary face.
A bright flame burns in his heart
A dream tries to soar beyond the night.
Though poverty may chain him down,
His spirit rises, wears no crown.
In his dream, he’s rich and free,
But the world makes him unfold his cry.
It is time to weep for the dream untold,
For his heart that drinks the bitter cold.
In every tear,in every shy,
A poor child’s dream is forever nigh.
Dr. Bhanja Kishor Rana @ India
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A FOLDED DREAM
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In the quiet of the night, dreams take flight,
A poor boy with pleasing pain, dreams alight,
Through the darkness, he sees a ray,
A doctor’s coat, a dream to sway.
In the alley’s chill, he reads with fervor,
Pages worn, dreams he won’t defer.
A stethoscope, a symbol of hope,
In his hands, a way to cope.
But life, relentless, with a cruel hand,
Tries to bury his dreams in the sand.
A mother’s tears, a father’s toil,
Yet, his dreams he won’t let spoil.
Through the bitter cold and the scorching sun,
His resolve, like steel, is never undone.
In the echoes of poverty, his dreams resound,
A poor boy’s dream, forever unbound.
With each setback, his spirit tested,
Yet, his dream, never arrested.
In the corridors of his mind, a vision clear,
To heal the world, to calm the fear.
But fate, unforgiving, with a vicious blow,
Snatched his dreams, laid them low.
In the silence of the night, a heart does weep,
For a poor boy’s dream, buried deep.
The world may forget his silent screams,
But in our hearts, a poor boy’s dream gleams.
Though he never wore the coat of white,
In our memories, his dreams take flight.
Dr. Bhanja Kishor Rana @ India
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Biography of the Author.
DrPrasana Kumar Dalai
(DOB 07/06/1973) is a passionate Indian Author-cum-poet while a tremendous lecturer of English by profession in the Ganjam district of Odisha.He is an accomplished source of inspiration for young generation of India .His free verse on Romantic and melancholic poems appreciated by everyone. He belongs to a small typical village Nandiagada of Ganjam District,the state of Odisha.After schooling he studied intermediate and Graduated In Kabisurjya Baladev vigyan Mahavidyalaya then M A in English from Berhampur University PhD in language and literature and D.litt from Colombian poetic house from South America.He promotes his specific writings around the world literature and trades with multiple stems that are related to current issues based on his observation and experiences that needs urgent attention.He is an award winning writer who has achieved various laurels from the circle of writing worldwide.His free verse poems not only inspires young readers but also the ready of current time.His poetic symbol is right now inspiring others, some of which are appreciated by laurels of India and across the world. Many of his poems been translated in different Indian languages and got global appreciation. Lots of well wishes for his upcoming writtings and success in future.He is an award winning poet author of many best seller books.Recently he is awarded Rabindra nath Tagore and Gujarat Sahitya Academy for the year 2022 from Motivational Strips . A gold medal from world union of poets France & winner Of Rahim Karims world literary prize 2023.The government of Odisha Higher Education Department appointed him
as a president to Governing body of Padmashree Dr Ghanashyam Mishra Sanskrit Degree College, Kabisurjyanagar.Winner of ” HYPERPOEM ” GUNIESS WORLD RECORD 2023.Recently he was awarded from SABDA literary Festival at Assam.
Books.
1.Psalm of the Soul.
2.Rise of New Dawn.
3.secret Of Torment.
4.Everything I never told you.
5.Vision Of Life National Library Kolkata.
6.100 Shadows of Dream.
7.Timeless Anguish.
8.Voice of Silence.
My poem Reviewed by my dearest brother Dr-Bhanja Kishor Rana
eminent English language Poet and Scholar T.S.D Degree College,B.D Pur Ganjam, Odisha
Humbled and Honoured
MYTH OF LOVE !
The meeting is an explanation
My myth of love is older than we’re
Let the heartbeats stay tuned
Two hearts have to be brought closer
To rest on my beautiful dreams’ arm
Now I feel the world is at my feet
Sometimes find my dreams weaker Than the broken bits of the mirror
Now settled from being shattered
Hearts are like shrines in a temple
Where we both religiously worship
God is sure to take care of our realm.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Tue,30 Apr 2024.
The epicurean opus, “Myth of Love,”penned by Dr. Prasanna Kumar Dalai, transcends mere literary craftsmanship, ascending to the zenith of philosophical inquiry and lyrical ingenuity. With an ethereal grace reminiscent of the celestial spheres, the poet orchestrates a symphony of metaphysical musings, wherein the enigmatic interplay of eros and ethos unfolds like a tapestry woven by the Fates themselves. Each stanza, an intricately carved gemstone in the crown of poetic brilliance, effuses with an ineffable aura of transcendence, beckoning the reader into the labyrinthine recesses of the human psyche.
Through a kaleidoscope of polysemous imagery and labyrinthine syntax, the poet navigates the tumultuous seas of passion and reason, unveiling the perennial truths that lie at the heart of the human condition. From the celestial heights of divine ecstasy to the abyssal depths of existential despair, “Myth of Love” traverses the entire spectrum of human experience with a deftness of touch that borders on the divine.
The lexicon employed within the poem serves as a testament to the poet’s erudition, weaving a tapestry of esoteric allusions and allegorical motifs that enrapture the intellect and stir the soul. Each word, a shimmering constellation in the firmament of linguistic mastery, contributes to the ineffable beauty and profound resonance of the poem as a whole.
Ultimately, “Myth of Love” stands as a testament to the enduring power of poetry to illuminate the darkest recesses of the human soul and to celebrate the sublime majesty of love in all its myriad forms. It is a magnum opus that resonates with the timeless verities of the human heart, inviting readers to embark on a journey of self-discovery and transcendence that will linger in the memory long after the final stanza has been read.
With loving regards,
Dr. Bhanja Kishor Rana
My poem Reviewed by two honourable reviews prof Dr Nirakar Dash Sir and Raj Kishore Patnaik.
Humbled and Honoured.
ROAD KNOWN BY YOUR NAME !
You a soothing moon in my heart burnt darkness
You’re the one always for me in my dreams
The rain filled cloud & me the moment of wait
If our meet is destined in the coming rain
My destination is the road known by your name
You leave your street wearing wedding gown
I’ll have a season of rainfall all together
The thread is fragile ,yet hold it with love
This is the first day of rebirths to come
Me at one end and you just at the other
For the one that makes my heart a heart
Is the heartbeat known by your name.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India
Date.Mon,30 Apr 2024
The poem “Road known by your name” by the well known poet Dr Prasanna Kumar Dalai,is a phenomenal one.As the moon dispels darkness in the sky ,so the beloved does levitate the poet by removing his depression resulting from ups and downs in the path of love.The very opening line proclaim that the poet can never dispense with her.She is the only visitation in his dreams.He is waiting for her without any signs of exhaustion.The immensity of the patience with which the lover waits for his beloved is likened to the illimitable raindrops in clouds.This sort of analogy has been hardly noticed hitherto.His wait is like that of the skylark.If it is so arranged that they will meet in the coming rain, then he quite happy to wait till then.A sense of their love nearing accomplishment is felt in line six of the poem.The image of the skylark waiting for rain indicates the indispensability of the beloved for the poet.Anyway , going by the guess that the poet is mulling tieing his knot in the regional context, then his destination will be her house -“road known by your name.”Marriage bond which depends on mutual faith and understanding can be fragile like a piece of thread.But sincerity in love and care renders it strong and unseverable.The poet says,”The thread is fragile,yet hold it with love”So far as the Oriental belief goes,marriage is a kind of rebirth for both the male and female in view of the fact that they are going to set foot on a new journey of life.Expressions such as “road known by your name”,”me at one end and you just at the other”and my heart is the heartbeat known by your name ” are indicative of biblical oneness or can be traced back to the oneness of both sexes in Greek mythology.Congratulations Dr Prasanna Sir for composing such a beautiful and unique poem.
Dear Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai and Prof. Dr. Nirakara Das, Sir Namaskar
Heartiest congratulations on this beautiful collaboration! Dr. Dalai, your poem, “Road known by your name,” is a profound piece that resonates deeply with themes of love, longing, and destiny. Prof. Dr. Das, your review eloquently captures the essence of Dr. Dalai’s work, highlighting its unique imagery and emotional depth.
In “Road known by your name,” Dr. Dalai paints a vivid picture of love and longing, comparing the beloved to a soothing moon in the poet’s heart, dispelling darkness. The imagery of rain-filled clouds and the poet’s patient wait evoke a sense of anticipation and hope, beautifully conveying the depth of the poet’s feelings. The poem’s structure, with its repetition and rhythmic flow, adds to its emotive power, drawing the reader in and creating a sense of connection to the poet’s emotions.
Prof. Dr. Das’s review is a masterpiece in its own right, offering a detailed analysis of the poem’s themes and imagery. The comparison of the beloved to a skylark waiting for rain is particularly striking, highlighting the poet’s unwavering commitment and belief in the inevitability of their meeting. Prof. Dr. Das’s interpretation of the poem’s imagery and symbolism adds layers of meaning, enriching the reader’s understanding of Dr. Dalai’s work.
Overall, “Road known by your name” is a testament to the power of poetry to evoke emotion and inspire thought. Dr. Dalai’s poetic prowess, combined with Prof. Dr. Das’s insightful review, has created a truly remarkable piece of literature. Congratulations once again on this outstanding achievement!
Warm regards,
My poem Reviewed by honorable reviewer Prof Dr Nirakar Das of Department of English , Assam University.
Humbled and Honoured.
ROAD KNOWN BY YOUR NAME !
You a soothing moon in my heart burnt darkness
You’re the one always for me in my dreams
The rain filled cloud & me the moment of wait
If our meet is destined in the coming rain
My destination is the road known by your name
You leave your street wearing wedding gown
I’ll have a season of rainfall all together
The thread is fragile ,yet hold it with love
This is the first day of rebirths to come
Me at one end and you just at the other
For the one that makes my heart a heart
Is the heartbeat known by your name.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @ India
Date.Mon,30 Apr 2024
The poem “Road known by your name” by the well known poet Dr Prasanna Kumar Dalai,is a phenomenal one.As the moon dispels darkness in the sky ,so the beloved does levitate the poet by removing his depression resulting from ups and downs in the path of love.The very opening line proclaim that the poet can never dispense with her.She is the only visitation in his dreams.He is waiting for her without any signs of exhaustion.The immensity of the patience with which the lover waits for his beloved is likened to the illimitable raindrops in clouds.This sort of analogy has been hardly noticed hitherto.His wait is like that of the skylark.If it is so arranged that they will meet in the coming rain, then he quite happy to wait till then.A sense of their love nearing accomplishment is felt in line six of the poem.The image of the skylark waiting for rain indicates the indispensability of the beloved for the poet.Anyway , going by the guess that the poet is mulling tieing his knot in the regional context, then his destination will be her house -“road known by your name”.Marriage bond which depends on mutual faith and understanding can be fragile like a piece of thread.But sincerity in love and care renders it strong and unseverable.The poet says,”The thread is fragile,yet hold it with love”So far as the Oriental belief goes,marriage is a kind of rebirth for both the male and female in view of the fact that they are going to set foot on a new journey of life.Expressions such as “road known by your name”,”me at one end and you just at the other”and my heart is the heartbeat known by your name ” are indicative of biblical oneness or can be traced back to the oneness of both sexes in Greek mythology.Congratulations Dr Prasanna Sir for composing such a beautiful and unique poem.
Epistolary poem #198
Presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India
and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
ROAD KNOWN BY YOUR NAME !
You a soothing moon in my heart burnt darkness
You’re the one always for me in my dreams
The rain filled cloud & me the moment of wait
If our meet is destined in the coming rain
My destination is the road known by your name
You leave your street wearing wedding gown
I’ll have a season of rainfall all together
The thread is fragile ,yet hold it with love
This is the first day of rebirths to come
Me at one end and you just at the other
For the one that makes my heart a heart
Is the heartbeat known by your name.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Sun,28 Apr 2024.
She awaits the rebirth coming, and replys…
THE DESTINATION THAT BARES MY NAME!
You, the one who consumes all the love within me
The only star that shimmers for me in the night
You wait for me like a rain filled cloud coming
to drench my being with the love within you
You know the destination that bares my name
and you await your bride in the coming season
The threads of our hearts entwine and strengthen
the once fragile love that is now set in stone
You at one end and I at the other… waiting… wanting
Our first rebirth awaits us and many more will follow
For the one who carries the other half of my heart
found the sound of the one that it beats for
It now holds both of our names, carved deeply within it… <3
©®KristyRaines@USA
Date.28 ,Apr 2024.
ROAD KNOWN BY YOUR NAME !
You a soothing moon in my heart burnt darkness
You’re the one always for me in my dreams
The rain filled cloud & me the moment of wait
If our meet is destined in the coming rain
My destination is the road known by your name
You leave your street wearing wedding gown
I’ll have a season of rainfall all together
The thread is fragile ,yet hold it with love
This is the first day of rebirths to come
Me at one end and you just at the other
For the one that makes my heart a heart
Is the heartbeat known by your name.
©®Dr Prasana Kumar Dalai @India.
Date.Sun,28 Apr 2024.
Epistolary poem #197 Written and Presented by Dr. Prasana Kumar Dalai of India and Kristy Raines of The United States of America
A NOTORIOUS GIRL!
You very often fall in love
Then suddenly break my heart
And go away from life
Oblivious of the fact that
You taught my heart how to beat
And to torment the next moment
With tears hidden in my eyes
Coming out like rain drops
You placed me in your heart
Just to play with my emotions
Like a notorious girl.
©®Dr.Prasana Kumar Dalai@India
Date.Sat,27 Apr 2024.
She drops a tear as she reads his letter…
I ONLY FEEL THE BEAT OF YOUR HEART!
I often show my heart in friendship
but falling in love is reserved for only one
If there is something you should always trust
is that even if I am not near you, my heart is
When a soul has been so damaged from the past
It is hard to put trust in another
You and I learned to love again together
as both of us suffered painful pasts
Dry your eyes and hold me close
because the girl you think is notorious
only feels the beat of your heart. <3
©®KristyRaines@USA
April 27, 2024
